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Plot and Idea: Refreshing
Summary: [ NIALL HORAN • ON HOLD ]
Within those isolated walls, I saw a girl. She looked so lonely, so pale and broken. I don't know why she captured my gaze, but I couldn't look away. She sat criss-cross with her back against the wall, staring at the empty space in front of her. Her hands mindlessly fumbled with her blonde strands as an impassive expression perched on her face. When asked why she was there, her answer was, "I am not for people, I was born to die. By the time I leave these white walls, I'll be accompanied by the fires of Hell." copyrighted to ashley compere © wonderful cover made by juh [xsnowberryx]
My Review: You write really well your story is easy to follow, I like it so far it is interesting. I hope you update soon. The spacing was correct as was your punctuation. There was no issue with your grammer either. Keep it up.
Rating: 9
Overall: I'd keep reading it