Sukor - pyaar ka gunaah

By Sukorian

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The story is abt a cop family without a woman touch. All a cops besides one. KN father Cop Ajay 1st son Cop ... More

Announcement
Character sketches
chapter 1
Birthday bash
Lost
Shraddha n Ajay
engagement
reality
the chase begins
A hint
Mr. Cop & Ms. Thief
My thoughts / Dreamworld
The robbery
face off
Maa
Singhania
Trapped
Suraj!
Old memories
A new family
Shopping
Final - Family
Announcement

Pyaar ka Gunnah

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By Sukorian

Hi

u know sometimes my titles have double meaning 😉.

Recap; Teju is back with memory loss. Chakor n Teju found each other... Suraj is heartbroken his brother n father lied to him n Vivaan.

Chakor; please Suraj if u want answers u need to as the right person. Suraj nods he wipes his tears away n stood up. With the support of Chakor he was able to face his mother whom he loved n still loves more than anything or anyone else.

Vivaan was crying. On her shoulder he doesn't know how it feels to have a mother this precious feeling was taken away from him in a young age. The only true love he got was from his brother Suraj.

When Vivaan saw Suraj coming out of his room he immediately hugs him. Suraj too hugs him. Chakor was admiring their bond n at the same time she was sad that she doesn't had this luxury to have a family.

Chakor took Tejus hand. Maa let's go downstairs we need answers. Teju nod not knowing what is going on but she loved the care of the brothers for each other. She places her hand on their had n blessed them.

Suraj n Vivaan were touched even not remembering them she is that kind.

They all come down to face KN n Ajay.

Shraddha comes to Suraj to talk to him but Suraj turns his face. Ajay; she pleaded me to tell u. Suraj; weak love or else u had listen to her. Shraddha was hurt... Chakor; Suraj! Suraj; Shut up!. His anger was legit but his way of expressing it was hurting.

Chakor was eyes become teary 😢. U too have a weak love.

Suraj was abt to say something but Vivaan stopped him. Suraj murmurs... my love is weak... his anger was raised but now it reached the peak. Did u just said my Love is weak?. Damn it he hit his fist on the wall. I was ready for u to sacrifice my career my life my reputation just to save u.

Suraj looked at the with red yet hurt n tears filled eyes. He shows her his palm n turned his face.

Suraj was breathing in short terms. Suraj; tell me y u lie abt Maa?.

Ajay come closer to him. Suraj; stay away n don't u dare to touch me... I don't know what I will do! Ajay lifts his hands as he know Suraj well.

KN comes there too for Vivaan but Vivaan too stepped back n was hiding behind Suraj. Suraj warns them for the last time.

Both stayed back it felt like a wall was between them a face to face talk but with hate on one side n on the other side sadness.

Ajay; Suraj Maa got shot in front of our eyes. U were 7 years old u were n u r a mama boy. Vivaan was in ur embrace. He was just too before leaving us she made u promise to care for him. U remember?

Suraj nod looking at his mother n holding his baby brothers hand.

Suraj; but that didn't answer my question!

Ajay; at the function mom lost her consciousness we called the ambulance but u two were to young n a constable drove u home. Maa died in front of u do u know u how long it took for u to speak again. Haan we lied bcz we didn't wanted to hurt u both.

We were in the ambulance when we got attacked again. We didn't know how they found us but we were surrounded. Papa took me aside n I was just scared. Being 10 years old even I had to suffer! I was attacked 2 times at the same day I saw my mother dying 2 times at the same day.

We thought they killed her but seeing her now they didn't Suraj Vivaan the true is that u saw her dying once but I saw her dying twice.

What u thought I would tell u that she was alive we took her to the hospital n lost her again??!!!

U thought I will risk ur life's just bcz u needed to know the truth?!

Suraj Vivaan remember my words I would never change my decision. I can kill myself for u but I can't let u die in suffer. U had seen her dying y should we open the fresh wound again saying she was alive n we lost her again.

I was not able to handle who would u???!!!

Suraj u were there for Vivaan only but no one was there for u. U know we... Dad n me were scared abt ur health more than abt anything else as Vivaan had u as a protector but u had no one.

My only crime I did was to love u that much that I hide the truth from u.

Now u tell me would u have bear with it???

Suraj n Vivaan shocked... u saw her dying twice.

Ajay; haan n I begged to dad not to tell u not even then when he dies or die this secret should die with us bcz I never wanted to hurt u both.

He had that close caressing their cheeks. Both little bothers hug their older brother.

Ajay; whispers. Yeh mere pyaar ka gunnah hai... kisi our ke pyaar ka nahi hai... (this is a crime of my love... not of someone else love...).

Suraj n Vivaan understands his decision to hide the truth. As both would've been never the person they r now.

Suraj knows that if he had known his mother could be alive he had never cared for Vivaan that much nor he had admired his father n brother n become a cop n he would never have met his love....

Vivaan knows that he has no right to speak in this matter n he doesn't want to as he feels save with his brothers n their decisions n he too understand y they hide it. If they had known it there would be never the bond between Suraj n him. But now his mom is back will she stay?

Suraj looked at Shraddha. Seems like ur love is weak his love to us is stronger... Shraddha shook her head n hugs him. Suraj; sorry!.

Suraj walked to his father. Suraj; sorry papa...!

(Love to use this pic 😍)

KN; it's ok ur anger is always on top of all. Now u explain me what u meant before that u were ready to lose ur career, reputation n n n etc. Suraj gulps. I found the vase it is save n back! We have the real culprit it is this Singhania we have evidence I recorded all the with my devices I had... He looked back to his brothers...

Ajay; oh hell no... forget this!

Vivaan was looking at Teju. Maa will stay here now? I mean Chakor bhabhi n her mother will stay here now. There was a crime done by using an innocent life.

KN walks to him. Would u like to explain me what ur brothers r hiding?

Vivaan; u r the cop but a big dumbo. Chakor bhabhi is not a dance she is thief.

Suraj; thief of my heart... he closed Vivaans mouth with his palm.

KN; u know she would steal the vase.
Suraj; woh she said she has to save someone's life my m... ur wife's live! 👿.

Teju; Chakor... what is going on here? I don't understand.

Suraj; ma.... aunty. Chakor is my fiancé. Teju turns. Really? She caresses her face.

Chakor was angry. U idiot u.... I will not leave u Chakor looked for a broom. N runs after Suraj.

KN; she is a thief right? He whispers in Ajays ear.

Ajay nods...

Vivaan; aunty ur room... Teju hold his hand. U can call me Maa.

Chakor was beating him.... u shout at me without a reason u apologies to everyone but not to me..

Suraj; aacha baba Sorry! Now u can be with me!

Chakor looked at him with teary eyes n a smile. But then she saw KN....

Suraj; I will handle this. Dad... Chakor n I will get married soon... we will marry at the same day as Bhai n Bhabhi.

Chakor; u can't take the special day of someone!

Suraj; chuuupp {shut up} gnashing his teeth's.

KN; Chakor u commit crimes I know to save her life but...

Suraj; but what she is our crown witness n if she will be charged she won't give a statement.

Ajay n KN looked at him. Ajay; u prepare everything....? Suraj; no I apologise to someone....

Ajay looked at Shraddha... she turns her face with a smile.

Vivaan - I'm getting nothing of what they r saying but I have my Maa n my 2nd SIL 😍! Jackpot!!!! -.

Teju; Chakor hasn't done any crime she did this all for me.

Suraj; haan aunty we know.

Vivaan; Maa she offers Maa!!

Suraj smiles. Haan Maa she didn't commit a crime.

Chakor - now it makes all sense y she was against crime husband cop, son cop 2nd son cope n 3rd...? -

She looked a Vivaan.

Vivaan; never ever I will become a cop.
Chakor; one normal amongst the cops!!!

Vivaan ✌️ but u called me idiot...

Chakor turns her face...

Suraj hold her hand.
Yeh haath main aaj ke baad nahi chorunga {I won't leave ur hand ever again}.

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