Will you be my Girlfriend ? ✅

By neeraja_p

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A cute funny romantic story of manan with tonnes and loads of fun between the duo and romance as well.. but... More

Prologue
Character Sketch...!
Oops...! Mischievous Nandini on work..!
Ragging Ragging..!!
Pay Back time Miss Murthy..!
Be My Girlfriend...
Motu-Laddoo_Golu
Family Reunion :)
secret planning..!!
"she is my gf"..."no she is mine"
first punch...!!!
Barking Panda and Monster ;)
Mission CaVya..!
caring monster..!
Shopping (part 1)
Shopping...!!!
shock+surprise
shock+surprise..contd
shock+surprise.. last part
Kiss ?????
first KISS.. ;)
"IT" is missing..!
New Story
Dull Nandu..!
Movie and romance..!
plan accomplished or backfired ??
Punishment ..!
stubborn heads..!
the 1)@te..!- part A
the 1)@te- part 2
the 1)@te- part 3
cute.. aren't they ??
"Mom and Dad"
freshers party..!!!
let the fun begin..!
Holi hai..!!!!
the drunk couple .. :P
i don't remember anything.. :(
Cute Moments..!!
trip Manglore begins..!!
Mangalore... we are here..!
fun @ home..!
Waterfalls..!!
Special moments..!
Golu ka bday..!!
little more fun..!!
Bonus Part :)
sweet dreams ;)
planning for ??
14th Feb is coming..!
Valentines Day.. <3
The proposal..!
Proposal part II
Angry Malhotra..!!
Romantic Manik..!!
Girls Problem..!!
Shout Out..!!
Mother's Day Special..!
dull day without nandu.!!
Punjabi kutta...Malayali kudi..!
Bonding :)
Seducing Manik..! ;)
Mann Mera..!
celebrating 100k
Furious Manik...!
Monster Mode On..!!
Revenge pe Revenge..!
Cute Chotu Manik..!!
Thank you, Surprise, Guess,Reward & New Intro
Happy Bday and Happy First Anniversary...
Promo and Gift
Celebration Continues..!! (part I)
Celebration Continues..! - Part II
Here comes Arushi Agarwal..!
Drunk Manik..!
Cute Malhotra
Lit
New Story Alert
I'll Miss you
Mangalore Dairies -1
Mangalore Dairies - 2
Mukti's birthday :)
Grown up Kids
Happy moments :)
Last Chapter
New Cover,Surprise & Authors Note
A/N - Please reply
The SEQUEL :D

Jealous Manik and Angry Nandini

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By neeraja_p

***V.IMP- Do Read:

Hey guys... I have something to say and I need your honest answer. The views have been decreasing very much and its very depressing. I have a very very busy schedule. We have 8 courses in this trimester and its hard to get some time and write updates with so much work on head... but im trying my best to spare some time for writing. Now you tell me... why are the views decreasing so badly?? from 2-3k views in the start to 1k and finally only 700-800 views on the last 2 updates

1.Are you people losing interest ?

2.Is the story line getting boring ?

3. You are also getting busy like me ?

Guys.. i need your honest answers... if you are losing interest Ill wind up this story and start a new one as i have quite interesting plot in my mind and im working on it as well, but didnt publish it yet as i thought ill not be able to do justice given having a very little time to write.

Do let me know... and yeah next update in less than 24 hours, provided I get atleast a little satisfaction with your response. Let me tell you its very depressing . I'll lose interest in writing if the same continues :( because your response is what that motivates me to write.

P.S:Ill update Mrs.Rockstar and Mr.007 tomorrow for sure :)

Happy reading :)

"what now ??" I asked crossing my hands on my chest and he gave me a puppy look and said

"intro karwa na... after that ill manage.."

"what will I get as a favour ?" I asked in a naughty tone

"meri beti ko tera naam dunga.." he said so seriously and we both looked at each other and started laughing crazily.

"okay let me talk to her first.." I said and he hugged me tightly.. crazy boys

"hi im Nandini..." I said extending my hand and she shook immediately with a huge smile on her face. Her smile was infectious.

"hi Im Arushi Agarwal.. im a new student here.. and I don't have many friends because im new to this city.. so hello first friend" she said in a go.. wow.. shes so talkative.. just like me.. yaieee

"hi im Nandini as I already said.. Im from Mangalore but now im staying at my parents friends house for studies... and we are in same class .. and trust me it would be so much fun.." I had a feeling that she would gel up with the gang very fast.

We were talking and I totally forgot about why I went to talk to her at the first place.

"nandu your food... soha and navya are searching for you" Aru came and put a plate of my favourite food: chicken grilled sandwich with fries chips and juice in front of me and then I realised.. oops.. bhul gayi nandu..

"ill call navya.." I said and was searching for my phone when navya and soha came and sat on the same table throwing glares

"kahan chali gayi thi tum.. pata hai hum dono kitna dar gaye the.." navya started

"aur apna phone kahan rakha hai tume.. why aren't you picking up our calls ??" soha said angily

"o meri Jhansi ki rani.. stop.. shush bilkul.." I said and then realised that I had to clam that monster also.. uff.. too much work nandini...

"so girls.. meet Arushi and Arushi meet my best friends Soha and Navya" I introduced them and soon we were laughing cracking some lame jokes and were so engaged that I totally forgot that it was the time for our college to end and manik might be waiting for me.

My phone was ringing and mukti's name was displayed

"haan mukku.. bol.." I said controlling my laugh on the recent story told by Arushi

"where the hell are you.. time dekha hai.. me and bhai are waiting for you from so long... what happened.. are you stuck somewhere ?? is everything alright ??"

"mukti breath.."

"are you crazy.. here we both are worried sick and you are asking me to breath.. bhai she is gone crazy.." mukti was blasting my ear drums.. I got up from my seat and took my bag not before hanging up on her call because she was PMSing and I cant handle one more crazy Malhotra.

"sorry guys.. Mukti and Manik are waiting for me and if I don't go they'll kill me.. bye.. see you tomorrow.." I said hurriedly and ran away.

**

"sorry guys.. vo I was talking to Arushi aur time pata hi nai chala.." I said panting as I was literally running all the way from canteen.

They both didn't talk to me and just sat inside the car. Mukti was grumpy and my monster was red in anger and jealousy... wow...! They were giving me silent treatment so I decided to turn on the radio.. and the very next moment

"shut up.." there was an echo in the car and I literally got goosebumps.. ab what was my fault.. they were silent so I wanted to listen music ab vo bhi banned hai toh mai kya karu

The whole ride was silent and trust me that was the most silent 30 minutes of my life... so silent that I fell asleep.

**

"kya ho gaya isko ??" I heard dj's voice and I tried opening my eyes but I was feeling warm and cozy so I just snuggled more into something that was giving me the warmth

"so gayi kumbhkaran aur kya.." I frowned hearing the reply but I was too lazy to open my eyes.

"jaa use room mail eke jaa aur sone de thodi der... phir uthke khana kha legi... uska favourite butter chicken bana hai aaj.." I heard mom say and the next moment my eyes shot up

"butter chicken.. kahan ???" I searched here and there but wait.. why was I in air and then I turned my head to see where I was and my eyes widened.

We were in the hall and I was in manik's arms... hawwwww... dadu dj and mom were there as well. I just hid my face with my palms and hid my face in manik's chest. Aaiyappa.. how will I face them...

"koi nai puttar.. tujhe sharmane ki koi zaroorath nai hai..." dj said and I sighed.. still I couldn't face them.. and why was he not putting me down

"manik" I mumbled with my face still covered and looked at his face through the gaps in my fingers and he was looking at me with a smirk with his eyebrow raised

"put me down naa.." I said in a pleading tone and he nodded his head in a no

"please babyyy..." I stretched the word and his face was watch worthy and he left me the next instant and my back kissed the floor

"owww ... monster.. aaise kyun chod diya mujhe ... dadu dj mom.. dekho naa.." I said trying to get up and rubbing my 'hurt' part.

"badmash.." mom said and twisted manik's ear and I smiled inside but put up my sad face

"ouch.. mom.. chodo.. vo nandu was so heavy toh mai kya karta.. chod diya... itna khati hai yeh.. like a baby elephant and she is also heavy like elephant .. my hands were paining isiliye chod diya.. see my hands became red is baby elephant ko utha ke.." he said and now my anger reached Himalayas

"manik you are dead.." I got up and started running behind him and he ran away before I could catch him. He ran upwards and I was chasing him

"manik stop..." I yelled running behind him but he showed me his tongue and ran away.. arggg.. he Is so dead...!!! I was chasing him and all of a sudden he disappeared... I searched in his room.. the washroom under the bed ... in the cupboard... how will he fit inside the cupboard.. stupid nandu...! I slapped my forehead

"nandu.. come lets have lunch... im hungry yaar..." I heard Mukti yell and I sighed.. even I was hungry... ill take care about this monster later... food always comes first..!

Me and mukti were totally dug into the food when manik walked into the dining hall as if nothing happened and sat down to eat food and I ignored him and focussed on my food.

He was looking at me from time to time and I knew it but I just choose to ignore.

Evening our friends came as it was Saturday and tomorrow was Sunday we decided to spend time together and go to college on Monday together. And there was a secret also. It was Aliya's bday tomorrow so we decided to plan a surprise secret party for her. She was such a cute and sweet friend. Our plan was that Dhruv and Mukti would distract Aliya and we all would decorate the terrace and plan for the cake and other stuff for the party.

We took permission from dadu dj mom and dad and they were happy and they didn't have any problem unless we aren't playing loud music at night and we happily agreed for that.

***

so if you want next update within 24 hours...

Ill update Mrs.Rockstar and Mr.007 tomorrow for sure :)

vote comment and if you like my story, do share with your friends...

keep smiling

take care

loads of love

Neeraja :)

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