Will you be my Girlfriend ? ✅

By neeraja_p

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A cute funny romantic story of manan with tonnes and loads of fun between the duo and romance as well.. but... More

Prologue
Character Sketch...!
Oops...! Mischievous Nandini on work..!
Ragging Ragging..!!
Pay Back time Miss Murthy..!
Be My Girlfriend...
Motu-Laddoo_Golu
Family Reunion :)
secret planning..!!
"she is my gf"..."no she is mine"
first punch...!!!
Barking Panda and Monster ;)
Mission CaVya..!
caring monster..!
Shopping (part 1)
Shopping...!!!
shock+surprise
shock+surprise..contd
shock+surprise.. last part
Kiss ?????
first KISS.. ;)
"IT" is missing..!
New Story
Dull Nandu..!
Movie and romance..!
plan accomplished or backfired ??
Punishment ..!
stubborn heads..!
the 1)@te..!- part A
the 1)@te- part 2
the 1)@te- part 3
cute.. aren't they ??
"Mom and Dad"
freshers party..!!!
let the fun begin..!
Holi hai..!!!!
the drunk couple .. :P
i don't remember anything.. :(
Cute Moments..!!
trip Manglore begins..!!
Mangalore... we are here..!
fun @ home..!
Waterfalls..!!
Special moments..!
Golu ka bday..!!
little more fun..!!
Bonus Part :)
sweet dreams ;)
planning for ??
14th Feb is coming..!
Valentines Day.. <3
The proposal..!
Proposal part II
Angry Malhotra..!!
Romantic Manik..!!
Girls Problem..!!
Shout Out..!!
Mother's Day Special..!
dull day without nandu.!!
Punjabi kutta...Malayali kudi..!
Bonding :)
Seducing Manik..! ;)
Mann Mera..!
celebrating 100k
Furious Manik...!
Monster Mode On..!!
Revenge pe Revenge..!
Cute Chotu Manik..!!
Thank you, Surprise, Guess,Reward & New Intro
Happy Bday and Happy First Anniversary...
Promo and Gift
Celebration Continues..! - Part II
Here comes Arushi Agarwal..!
Jealous Manik and Angry Nandini
Drunk Manik..!
Cute Malhotra
Lit
New Story Alert
I'll Miss you
Mangalore Dairies -1
Mangalore Dairies - 2
Mukti's birthday :)
Grown up Kids
Happy moments :)
Last Chapter
New Cover,Surprise & Authors Note
A/N - Please reply
The SEQUEL :D

Celebration Continues..!! (part I)

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By neeraja_p

hey guys.. long time no see.. well this has been one hell of a month for me.. and sorry for delaying the update.. but.. but but.. i didnt reach the target views and votes :(

chalo koi nai... i have split the update into 3 halves as i thought it was getting a little lengthy.. ill post the 1 and 2 parts now and 3rd one ill post tomorrow (need to work on that a little) 

and sadly Jasmine isnt coming in these 2 parts but will enter in the part that ill post tomorrow and the promo part also hasn't been included as it was getting way too lengthy...

Happy reading..! and haan.. please.. vote comment and share :) it really really means a lot :)

 P.S Inline comments are my favourite :)  

Celebrations Continues...!!!

Nandini's POV:

I woke up I feeling something soft like feather on my face. I tried to push it away but couldn't. finally I got irritated and opened my eyes only to see manik's love filled eyes.

"good morning Jaan and happy birthday.." he said giving a light peck on my lips and I returned the favour by copying him

"very good morning Mr.Malhotra... and a very happy birthday.."

"chalo move now I have to get ready.. dadi was saying that there is some puja in house today." I said and tried to get up but he didn't budge.

"lets sleep for a little while.. phir everyone will come and ill not get some alone time with you" he said pulling me close and for a change I agreed with is point and snuggled more close to him and closed my eyes and he too did the same.

After a while:

I heard some irritating sound and tried to move but how could I when I was trapped in a vice grip. I tried to push him but he didn't move a millimetre.

"manik get up... your stupid phone is ringing.." I said in a sleepy tone trying to wake him up.. key word 'trying'

"baby please.. sleep aur mujhe bhi sone do.." and he pulled me more close to himself.

"but your phone... its irritating me" I said wrapping my hands around him and hiding my face in the crook of him neck and the very next moment I heard a 'thud' sound.

"what did you do..?" I asked him trying to push the sleep off my head

"nothing that should worry you.. now sleep.. bilkul shush.." and kissed on top of my head

After an hour:

"what are they both doing..?? I tried calling bhai's number .. fitst it was ringing and now its out of coverage area.. and if I knock the door everyone will come to know about them.." mukti thought in a worried tone and her thoughts broke with a knock on the door. She hesitantly walked towards the door and to her shock it was Nyonika

"mom aap..?" she asked in a surprised tone and Nyonika walked into the room pushing her away

"haan mai.. kyun ?? aur tu ab tak ready kyun nai hui.. pata hai na ghar mai puja hai.. aur nandu kahan hai.. mai use wish karne aai thi.."

"mom.. nandu na bhai ko uthane gayi hai.. she said she wants to wish bhai first in the morning.." mukti tried to cover up

"aww... kitni sweet hai meri bacchi.. accha koi nai.. maine sab ko utha diya hai.. you all have 30 minutes.. jaldee say get ready and some down okay.." to which mukti nodded obediently and Nyonika went down giving a 'good morning kiss' to her lovely daughter.

"arggghhh.. bhai.. nandu.. ill kill you both.." mukti said gritting her teeth and started banging the inter connected door.

**

"manik.. someone is knocking the door..." I said in an irritated tone pushing myself more into him

"let them.. I just don't want to get up.." he said pulling me closer and I sighed but arggg.. the banging sound increased. Wait .. what...

"manik.. utho.. chodo mujhe..." I said getting up but he pulled me back

"nandu.. chup bilkul chup... one more word from your mouth and ill shut it for next few hours and you very well know about that.." he ordered.. wow... only this monster Malhotra can order even in sleep

"manik get up.. subah ho gayi hai and mom.." I wasn't able to continue as in a blink of eye I was under him and his lips on mine. He kissed me so deep and passionately that I forgot what I wanted to say.

We broke apart gasping for air and I could hear the banging on door again... without giving him time to think what was going in my mind I pushed him with all the force and rang to open the inter connected door. He was surely not expecting that... hehehe... he got up from the floor rubbing his bum which made me laugh more and I ran for my life before he gets up only to see a fire spitting Mukti at the door.

I gave her a nervous smile and walked towards washroom

"stop Mrs.Nandini Manik Malhotra.." she said and boom... I was scared now.. mukti this angry that too in the morning .. deadly combination.

"yess Miss Malhotra.." I asked her extra sweetly

"what the hell were you doing from morning... call kiya maine.. tera phone switched off hai aur bhai ka out of coverage area.. I was knocking the door from last 20 minutes and you opened the door now.. you know mom aayi thi this morning to wish you aur tum room mai nai thi.. toh I had to make some bahana.. you know it was so difficult to cover up for you .. aur tum ho ki you are showing me your 32 teeth.. pepsodent se brush kiya hai kya aaj..??" she was talking non stop.. aaiyappa.. ise kya ho gaya ??

I stood in front of her and held her shoulders and said

"breath mukti.. bilkul shush.." I copied manik from morning hehehe

"ab sab theek hai na.. vo tera monster bhai.. he didn't let me get up.. tightly pakad ke kumbhkaran ke jaise so gaya.. ab mai kya karu.. he didn't leave me.. jab I tried to tell him ki someone was knocking the door toh vo.. vo.. ummm vo.." I couldn't complete because I couldn't tell her what her bhai did to shut me up

"accha now go get ready.. ill see if bhai is ready or not... please get ready very fast... zyada time nai hai.. mom ne tumhare liye dress select kiya hai.. wear that and come.." and I walked into the washroom taking the dress mom selected.. it was so pretty so simple.. I loved it ..

***

I was sleeping peacefully .. I had a beautiful dream... me and nandini were in a garden and there was a small baby girl with us probably of one year in a cute pink frock. Baby was in nandini's arms and I was just laying beside her looking at both of them. I was playing with baby's chotu chotu hands... and suddenly

"baby papa bolo... pa pa.." nandini was telling the baby and the next moment I froze

"bhai..." I heard someone scream and I got confused... baby toh 'papa' bolne wali thi.. why was she saying bhai.. and baby itna zor se kyun bol rahi hai.. vo toh baby hai na then I felt a blow on my head.. it was hard but not too hard.. but ouch.. ek aur.. wait whats going on

"bhai.. get up for God's sake.."

Wait.. what.. whats going on... I opened my eyes and saw mukti staying on the bed holding a pillow..

Nandu aur Baby kahan chale gaye.. what was I doing in my room

"bhai.." mukti yelled hitting me with pillow again.. ouch yaar.. ise kya ho gaya hai..

"mukku.. yaar.. kya hua hai tujhe.. subah subah nandu ke jaise kyun behave kar rahi hai.." I said turning to the other side and covering my head with the pillow. And next I heard the sound of the door.. means mukti chali gayi.. I again closed my eyes.. baby was about to say 'papa' I wanted to hear that and suddenly it started raining .. I was all wet... ab kya ho gaya...

SPLASH..!!!

I got up with a jerk and my whole bed was wet.. baby ne itna susu kar diya.. eww... I was sleeping in susu... nandu ne baby ko diaper nai dala.. I got angry.. how can she be so careless.. baby ne mujh par susu kar diya...

"baby kahan hai.." I asked mukti and she shot a glare

"shes bathing and you also go.." I didn't hear what she said after that and barged into their room. I know nandu has the habit of not locking the door while bathing so I just went inside.

**

I took a nice shower and was wearing my clothes when Manik barged into the washroom. I still didn't wear my top and I realised it soon all thanks to Aaiyappa. I was searching for it when he came close and held my shoulders

(P.S please ignore their clothes and the surroundings.. just remember the scene and connect it to this situation.. I couldnt find any better pics)

"baby kahan hai ?" he asked angrily and I gave him a blank look and asked "kaun baby ??"

"our baby.." he replied in an obvious tone and my eyes became wide like saucers. Is he gone mad.. shaadi hi nai hui ab tak.. from where did baby come ?

"manik.. we don't have a baby yet.." I said gritting my teeth and his grip on me tightened

"we have a baby and you forgot to put a diaper and usne mujhpe susu kar diya.. see im all wet.." he said showing his shirt.. I had 2 options.. i) slap him hard and bring his senses back ii) kiss him hard for acting all cute by dreaming even after waking up.. but how could I miss this wonderful opportunity... I pushed him into the shower and turned it on.

"are you crazy.. baby kahan hai.. tell me that first ??" he was still stuck there.

"manik.. you idiot.. wake up sleepy head... this is our birthday.. and we are not married yet and we don't have a baby... and how could you just walk into the washroom.. what do you think of yourself" I said wearing my top.. duffer.. he just barged in.. shameless fool... donkey.. monkey.. buffalo..

"what..??? baby nai hai ??" argghhhh... kya karu mai iska.. he was still stuck with the 'baby' part

"nahi buddhumaan.. baby nai hai.. and now out .." I said pointing at the door.

"huhh.. I have seem more.. yaad hai when you were not well.. I was the one who changed your clothes... so stop acting all shy in front of me.." he said and my eyes would have popped out of the sockets... how dare he...!!!!!!

****

Im adding Maniks attire in this update 

dont forget to vote and comment before you go to the next update :)

keep smiling 

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