Will you be my Girlfriend ? ✅

By neeraja_p

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A cute funny romantic story of manan with tonnes and loads of fun between the duo and romance as well.. but... More

Prologue
Character Sketch...!
Oops...! Mischievous Nandini on work..!
Ragging Ragging..!!
Pay Back time Miss Murthy..!
Be My Girlfriend...
Motu-Laddoo_Golu
Family Reunion :)
secret planning..!!
"she is my gf"..."no she is mine"
first punch...!!!
Barking Panda and Monster ;)
Mission CaVya..!
caring monster..!
Shopping (part 1)
Shopping...!!!
shock+surprise
shock+surprise..contd
shock+surprise.. last part
Kiss ?????
first KISS.. ;)
"IT" is missing..!
New Story
Dull Nandu..!
Movie and romance..!
plan accomplished or backfired ??
Punishment ..!
stubborn heads..!
the 1)@te..!- part A
the 1)@te- part 2
the 1)@te- part 3
cute.. aren't they ??
"Mom and Dad"
freshers party..!!!
let the fun begin..!
Holi hai..!!!!
the drunk couple .. :P
i don't remember anything.. :(
Cute Moments..!!
trip Manglore begins..!!
Mangalore... we are here..!
fun @ home..!
Waterfalls..!!
Special moments..!
Golu ka bday..!!
little more fun..!!
Bonus Part :)
sweet dreams ;)
planning for ??
14th Feb is coming..!
Valentines Day.. <3
The proposal..!
Proposal part II
Angry Malhotra..!!
Romantic Manik..!!
Girls Problem..!!
Shout Out..!!
Mother's Day Special..!
dull day without nandu.!!
Punjabi kutta...Malayali kudi..!
Bonding :)
Seducing Manik..! ;)
Mann Mera..!
celebrating 100k
Furious Manik...!
Monster Mode On..!!
Cute Chotu Manik..!!
Thank you, Surprise, Guess,Reward & New Intro
Happy Bday and Happy First Anniversary...
Promo and Gift
Celebration Continues..!! (part I)
Celebration Continues..! - Part II
Here comes Arushi Agarwal..!
Jealous Manik and Angry Nandini
Drunk Manik..!
Cute Malhotra
Lit
New Story Alert
I'll Miss you
Mangalore Dairies -1
Mangalore Dairies - 2
Mukti's birthday :)
Grown up Kids
Happy moments :)
Last Chapter
New Cover,Surprise & Authors Note
A/N - Please reply
The SEQUEL :D

Revenge pe Revenge..!

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By neeraja_p

Check out the new story Mrs Rockstar and Mr 007... hope you will like it :)

So as we decided to team up in the last update.. I'm putting up the names of people in Manik and Nandini's team... here it goes..

Manik's team : @MaNanAddict @snehabothra @a_sweet_present @asoma_soma @salonidoshi19 

Nandini's team : @cute_princess_29 @dishtaniya @ShreyalLakhiyar @KaynatSharma @starshining_luv @sweetoepiepri   

(hope i didnt miss anyone)

Its unedited chapter..!! hope you enjoy it.. #fingerscrossed..!

Read note at the end.its important.

Happy reading :)

Manik's POV:

The breakfast was un usually quite.. may be because my baby was not talking and chirping and throwing tantrums like she does everyday... everyone was curious seeing her silently eating her food and not being able to control anymore Dj asked

"beta nandu kya hua ?? itni chup kyun hai tu..?" she asked lovingly and mukti giggled as I think she had slight idea as to what happened today morning.

"khana accha nai laga kya ??" now mom was also getting worried and nandini nodded her head in a No.

"zaroor is nalayak nae hi kuch kiya hoga.." dad said making me frown and to everyone's surprise nandini nodded her head in a yes and I wanted to bang my head to the nearby wall.. very bad move Nandini Malhotra..

"What ???" everyone said loudly and I gulped I was so dead now.. dam you nandini

Dad stood up from his chair and walked towards nandini and said making her look at him

"kya bola manik ne..??" his tone sacred me.

Nandini's POV:

An hour back:

"so from today .. I mean right from this morning. You will do what I say.. if I say Nandu sit you will sit... if I say Nandu stand you will stand.. and if I say Nandu give me a kiss you will give me one no matter where we are and who all are there around us.. you get that..?"

He said and to say I was shocked was beyond understatement. But I nodded my head in a yes to keep that monster calm for a little time and even I needed some time to think as to what and how I can handle him. He got up and left to the washroom to get ready and I sighed in relief. I immediately got up and ran to mine and mukti's room. I laid on the bed and closed my eyes but how could the Malhotra siblings let me in peace.

"kya hua ?? bhai ne kya kaha ??" mukti said coming out of the washroom drying her hair and I closed my eyes tightly but how could she keep quite... she gave a tight slap on my arm and I got up rubbing the place I got hit...

"yaar goluuu.... You are so dead..." I got up and there started a pillow fight and finally we landed on bed after 15 minutes giggling and laughing...

"so kya hua ??" she asked again and I told her what her Big brother asked me to do and at first her eyes went big like saucers then she burst out laughing and I sighed.. crazy malhotras..!!

"wow.. nandu that would be so funny... just imagine... bhai sabke samne in canteen he will say nandu kiss me and you will do it ...awwww ... you both will look so cute..." she said and I blushed imagining it... hawww what will everyone think... no ways im doing that... I have to come with an alternative... this is not going to work... manik will really make me kiss him in front of everyone.. this cant be happening... kya karu ??? aaiyappa.. please help... I was thinking of all the possibilities when suddenly mukti snapped her fingers in front of my eyes and I gave her a blank look...

"god nandu... itna kyun zone out ho rahi hai tu... I said something.. suna tune..?" she asked and I gave her a sheepish smile... 'impossible' she muttered and got up from the bed. I was about to ask her what was she saying, when suddenly Mom called us for breakfast and I went to get ready, I will talk to mukti later.

By the time I came out of the washroom mukti was not there... I was packing my bag still thinking how to deal with manik , when Eureka...!!! I grinned evilly and took my phone

N- im in trouble.. need help..!

I left a text in out Troublemakers group...hehe.. you all don't know na.. we have a secret group on WhatsApp... Me, Cabir, Dhruv, Abhi, Aryaman are the proud members of this group. Whenever I needed help they always came to my rescue.

C- ab kya ho gaya nanduuuu ???

Cabirs reply came and I frowned... how can they confirm its always me.. huhh

N- its not me... its manik... he has put me in a bigggg trouble...

I typed putting a very sad emoji for little more sympathy.

Aryaman – kya hua gf ??? kya help chahiye ???

Aww Arya was the sweetest...

N- vo manik has kept conditions ki jab tak uska gussa kam nai ho jaye I have to act like a puppet whose strings will be in Manik's hands..!

I tried to tell them in the best way possible

c- what ??????????

Aryaman- kya ?????????

I slapped my forehead and sent a msg again.

N- ok .. so the thing is.. I tried to teach a lesson to manik last night and the plan worked.. don't ask me what I did because I WILL NOT TELL YOU... and unfortunately manik got pissed more than I thought ... so now till his volcano cools down he wants me to do whatever he tells me, which is quite dangerous... and I am stuck now...!!

Finally... an elaborate explanation should help. There was no reply for few minutes and I was waiting impatiently as I was getting late for breakfast. I was hungry also :( 

Abhi – the best way to get manik tamed is Uncle and Dadu.. he is scared of them lekin batata nahi.. so use his fear to your advantage but don't piss him off more.. it might get dangerous.. ok baby doll..??

Awwwwwwwww... I just felt like pulling Abhi's cheeks... he is choooo chweetttttt....

N- Aye Aye Captain... thanks for the advice...

And I went down to eat breakfast happily but I acted a little sad and low on the table to get my work done.

Present:

Manik's POV:

"kya bola manik ne..??" dad said and I was getting scared... what if unko gussa aa gaya that his princess is in my control or worse what if nandu convinces him and I will become a scape goat... no this cant be happening. I have to do something before she spills everything.

"dad vo.." I started but he cut me off

"chup kar.. princess tum bolo.. kya kiya manik ne.." he asked her lovingly... hein ?? what am I to him ??? aaise hi dal mai curry leaf ke jaise mujhae nikal ke pekh(throw) diya ... wah manik... kaise din aa gaye tere... apni hi family mai koi value nai bachi teri..

I went on and on and on... but her next words shook me

"vo mujhe car drive nahi karne deta... he says I cant drive a car.. dad aap bolo na ki atleast weekly once ill drive to college.. please.."

The was she said 'please' could have melt Himalayas... dad kya cheez hai.. he shot me a glare and said

"aaj sae nandu will drive to college jab bhi uska man kare.. samjha manik..." dadu said in a stern tone and I nodded my head like a good boy.

"mujhe bhi drive karna hai" now how could mukti keep quite... she used to literally fight with me for that.. now its gone... koi mujhe college leke toh jayega na ??? I doubt it..!

"beta lekin Manik ko drive karne do na.. vo tumse bada hai.." Dj said and I nodded my head in a yes like a good boy i was

"Nayalak.." dad commented and my jaw dropped to the floor... mai ??? nayalak ????? hawwwwwww ????? Did you all hear that ???

"ok.. but dhyaan se... you both will drive under Manik's supervision.." Mom said.. kahir..! kisi ko toh mai yaad hun.. I love you Mom.. I looked at her and she passed me a flying kiss and I held it with my hand and placed it near my heart and she just aww'ed pulling my cheeks. Huhh...

Dadu Dad Nandu on one side

Dj. Mom and Me on the other and Mukti.. I seriously doubt her actions.. she keeps jumping this side to that side.

Wait in all this drama I forgot to start my revenge on my nandu... how in the world of purple watermelons did she manage to get that off my mind...

Smart... very smart move.. but guess what I have better plans..!

---End of Manik's POV---

In college: (During the break time)

"navya meri baath to suno.." cabir said running behind a fuming navya..

"nai sunni humhe aapki baath.. aapko bilkul bhi saram nahi hai??? Uss bevakoof Ridhimma sae chipke hue the... hey matarani... bacha lo humhe.." she said dramatically joining her hands looking up praying to her Matarani.

'drama queen' cabir muttered under his breath but unfortunately she heard him. She turned around with her hands on her waist and said giving him a stern look

"kya bola aapne ? Drama Queen ??? humhe drama queen bulaya aapne ??? boliye kis angle sae drama queen lagte hai hum ???" she started shouting gathering attention of the people nearby and cabir face palmed

"kuch nai meri maa.. mujhe maaf kardo.. galti ho gayi..." he said joining his hands bending down before her and navya did a small imaginary victory dance and said

"yeh last chance okay ??" to which the very sweet cabira nodded his head in a yes.

"cabie humhe bhook lagi hai.." navya said in a sad tone and before she could register what could happen cabir picked her up in his arms and started walking towards the canteen despite her protests to put her down.

In Canteen:

"abhi mere liye one burger with extra cheese, one mango juice and one large fries.. and wait one chocolate ice cream also " mukti said looking at abhi and he gave her weird look

"tum seriously itna khati ho... but why don't you gain an ounce of weight.. bilkul skeleton ki tarah dikhti ho..." he said making a funny face and

SPLASH...!!!

"Fuat the whck...!!!" he said rubbing his face with his hand... she threw a glass full of water on his face.

"go get the food im hungry.." she ordered and he shook his head in disbelief... what was with girls and food.. food was their first love.. he was talking to himself but snapped out of his thoughts when he heard cabir and navya's voice.

Navya was hitting cabir continuously and he was trying to escape.. seeing this he started laughing ... cabir ran to abhi and stood behind him to escape navya

"Abhi bhai aap hato... dekti hun mai isko.." she said angrily and Abhi raised his hands in air surrendering himself

"saale... harami... meri madat karne ke wajah tu use support kar raha hai... dekhli bhai teri dosti..." cabir said and ran away giving a shot to Abhi on his back who winced at cabir's act.

"abhiiiii" mukti whined and abhi bowed down and said "5 minutes princess..." and went to bring the food she ordered while mukti clapped her hands in excitement.

**

Nandini was walking towards the canteen when suddenly she was pulled in to a room and someone palmed her mouth before she could scream and the very next moment the hand was replaced by two lips and her eyes widened in surprise as she knew who it was.

Manik...

He was kissing her hungrily and she was too shocked even to respond... which added more fuel to the fire. He bit her lip making her gasp at his act and he deepened the kiss and in few moments nandini was too lost in it to think anything else. After what felt like eternity manik broke the kiss feeling her breathless. She didn't say a word but cupped his face lovingly and asked him

"kya hua manik ???" he took a step back and nodded his head in a No and said "punishment for mornings drama..!" and smirked looking at her shocked face.

Before she could escape he trapped her in his arms and said pulling her close to the maximum extent possible

"don't even try to escape.. im not going to buy it.. come lets go to the canteen im hungry.." manik said and dragged her with him.

*****

Enjoyed the update ??? Hope you did.. dont forget to vote and comment expressing your views.. i would love to read them.

NOTE: So as you all might know that Im an MBA student... sadly yes and our placements will start exactly in 10 days from now... there will be a lot of travelling and continuous training so I will not be free till the end of October that too if I;m placed somewhere or else the journey of interview continues *sigh* 

i need your best wishes to wrap up the drama and be back to you all as soon as possible. but till then I may not get time to write and update... in any instance i get time ill update for sure..  my 2 years of efforts will go into drain if I dont crack a good job... hope you understand...

Keep Smiling

Take care

Loads and loads of Love

Until next update

Yours Neeraja :)

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