Dedicated to @JessandRich for writing the book
Plot and Idea: Used
Summary: "ELOUNOR BROKE UP! BUT WHY?" Well, because let's just say something happened, with Louis. "Well why?" I'll tell you
My Review: Okay I see the idea, I see what your going for. The beginning is not so good with grammar and there is some repetition. Your cover is not so good maybe get a cover made by someone else or try making a new one. Be more descriptive with the other characters, not just Louis and Harry. But other than that your grammar is fine, and the spacing is good.
Rating: 4 (for now just get the new cover and edit)
Overall: This is leaning towards a little cliche but it is just the beginning and you can add your own twists on new chapters.
This book has 2 Chapter.