Tris life after Allegiant

By Megan46Dauntless

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What would have happend if Tris didn't took Caleb's place? If Uriah woke up? It takes place in the Dauntless... More

Chapter 1: Uriah's date
Chapter 2: Inside Fourtris
Chapter 3: Shopping
Chapter 4: The Ittaliano
Chapter 5: Candor or Dauntless?
Chapter 6: TGIF
Chapter 7: Love Birds
Chapter 8: Evil starts with E
Chapter 9: A Night to Remember
Chapter 10: #Akward!
Chapter 11: Bromance
Chapter 12: T or D?
Chapter 13: Monday :(
Chapter 14: Lazy in Work
Chapter 15: FA
Chapter 16: Drunk Love
Chapter 17: Such a Normal Day
Chapter 18: Lets take Four shopping!
Chapter 19: Damn You, Uriah!
Chapter 20: Young Love
Chapter 21: My Dear Candor
Chapter 22: Not a Bad Night after All
Chapter 23: Hangover
Chapter 24: Initiates
Chapter 25: Jealous = Hot
Chapter 26: My World Falls Apart
Chapter 27: Everything's
Chapter 28: Busted?
Chapter 29: Fangirl is the word?
Chapter 30: Dumb Erudites are Real!
Chapter 31: 46
Chapter 32: Fights
Chapter 33: Paintball pt.1
Chapter 35: DauntlessCake
Chapter 36: Stage 2
Chapter 37: Face the Consequence
Chapter 38: Drama Queen
Chapter 39: Troublemaker
Chapter 40: Sickness
Chapter 41: Unfair
Chapter 42: Lets take Four shopping...again
Chapter 43: Acting Suspicious
Chapter 44: Girls Chat
Chapter 45: Being brave enough to Propose
Chapter 46: Ready?
Chapter 47: Fear Landscapes
Chapter 48: Mysterious Girl
Chapter 49: The Blame's on both
Chapter 50: You gotta be kidding me
Chapter 51: Research
Chapter 52: Trapped
Chapter 53: The Tank
Chapter 54: Pansycake has gone Mad
Chapter 55: Homesick
Chapter 56: Get this Over With
Chapter 57: Breaking Free
Chapter 58: Back on Track
Chapter 59: Walking over People
Chapter 60: Results
Chapter 61: Getting Ready
Chapter 62: Big Day yet?
Chapter 63: Flowers 4 the bride
Chapter 64: The Wedding!
Help!

Chapter 34: Paintball pt.2

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By Megan46Dauntless

Zeke POV

I land on the ground, and run a little to keep my balance.

It's our turn to hide the flag. We, as official Dauntless can't help them, but we can shot the other team.

I need this to distract me. I haven't decide anything about Shauna.

We're trying not to fight.

We stop in front of the Ferris Wheel.

"Kay guys! You have to decide your strategy and hide your flag" Tris explains.

"Strategy for what?" asks a brunette boy.

"For finding the other team's flag and keep them from finding ours, Sam" Uriah says.

"You already played this before, have you ever win? where you hide it?" asks a tall boy.

"What's your name?" I ask him before anyone can say anything.

"Paul"

"Well Paul, you're stupid. we obviously can't tell you where to hide it, what will be the point in that huh?"

He doesn't say anything.

"Out of curiosity, have any of you win this before?" asks a tall blonde girl.

"Yeah, we all have" Uriah, the showoff, says.

I roll my eyes.

"Well...WE DON'T HAVE ALL NIGHT! Hurry up!" I'm losing it, they'll wouldn't survive a minute in war.

"Any ideas?" Tris asks them.

"We could...divide into teams and go look for their flag." Says a girl.

"Okay, who agrees with Alex?" Uriah asks them.

"I don't" says Paul.

"Then what's your better idea?" Tris asks sounding bored. She's acting so much like...Four.

"Now that you ask, I think we should hide well the flag, then some can stay hide, so they can defend the flag, and the others go look for the flag."

"Classic" Uri says.

He just ignores Uriah's comment an continues talking. "So? What do you think?" He asks looking at Tris, Uriah and me.

"Don't ask us" Tris says.

"If you're not gonna tells us what to do or help us decide, what are you here for?" Lucas asks.

"Because I'm your instructor" Tris and Uriah say as I say "to shot others"

"We're running out of time! Let's use his stategy" Lauren's brother says pointing at Paul.

The others just nod.

"Finally!" I say.

"You still have to hide the flag" Uri reminds them.

"Didn't your sister told you anything about this?" A medium size brunette asks Lauren's brother.

"No Diana, she said it will be cheating." He says.

Cheating? Whaaaaat?! Pfff it will just be helping.

I told Uriah about it. It isn't cheating. Lame Lauren, really lame.

"Let's just put it on the floor and cover it with dirt, no one will look on the floor." A girl who's name started with M.

"I guess that will be alright" Lucas says.

"Pansycakes. Just hide it in the freaking ferris wheel or something" Uriah says.

"Four will find it easily" Tris says.

"Why?" Asks Alex.

"Just believe me" Tris says.

"Whatever just out in in the damn floor" I tell them, we don't have more time! The others might have already start looking for us.

Lauren's bro takes the flag from Uriah's hand and puts in in the floor, then Diana covers it with dirt.

"Wasn't so hard huh?" I tell them.

"Now. Who's gonna stay, and who is gonna leave." Tris reminds them.

"The ones with good aim leave, the others stay." The blondy girl says.

"Kay, who has good aim?" Lauren's bro asks.

"Jennifer and Paul are good" Tris says.

"Josh and I" Sam says looking at Lauren's bro

"Good, so Jen, Paul, Sam, Josh, Zeke and me" Tris says.

"What?! No way! I'm going!" Uriah complains.

"Don't think so little bro, you're staying" I tease him.

"Why me?!" He continues.

"Cuz you're the instructor" I tell him.

"Tris too"

"But she said first, and she has better aim that you"

"No she doesn't!"

"Yes I do" Tris says.

"Whatever, forget it" he finally gives up.

I chucke and he rolls his eyes.

"Sam, Paul, go East" Tris indicates, "Jen, Josh, West"

"Kay Six" Paul says, the other just nod.

Hahaha Six? Really? Like Four? Hahahaha, I'll tease her later.

"Then, I guess we're North" I say.

"Yep" she agrees.

I hear Uriah telling the others positions to hide.

"Let's go then" Jennifer says.

Everyone goes the way they were told to.

Tris and I walk North carefully, looking around, paying atention to any possible sound.

Nothing.

We continue walking until we hear paintball guns shots.

We turn to look West, where the sound came from.

We quickly glance at each other and without a word we start running towards the sound.

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