Roots

By FireyRose16

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Beatrice Prior- a lonely girl who grew up in Abnegation Tobias Eaton - a boy who never belonged Tris and Tob... More

Prologue: I Wait
Chapter 1: The Choice is Mine
Chapter 2: I Jump
Chapter 3: Those Eyes
Chapter4: He's Gone
Chapter 5: The Feeling
Chapter Tris: Too Close
Chapter 7: I Apparently Have A Death Wish
Chapter 8: Shoot
Chapter Fourtris: Drowning
Chapter 11: Playing With Knives
Chapter 12: A Breath In The Face Of Fear
Chapter 13: Red
Chapter 14: We Kiss
Chapter 15: Love You Too
Chapter 16: Old Rage
Chapter 17: First
Chapter 18: Never Have I Ever
Chapter 19: Dauntless or Pansycake
Chapter 20: Toby
Chapter 21:Passed Out On Zeke's Floor
Chapter 22: You're Up
Chapter 23: Not Being Heard
Chapter 24: Broken
Chapter 25: Capture the Flag
Chapter 26: Finally
Chapter 27: Free
Chapter 28: In Public
Chapter 29: Hoping
Chapter 30: PARTY!
Chapter 31: Truth Or Dare... Round Two
Chapter 32: Will You Marry Me?
Chapter 33: "YES," she squeals
Chapter 34: And the Two of us Head to Breakfast.
Chapter 35: He Gives Us A Look, And Leaves
Chapter 36: This Is The Start
I Hate Myself for doing this

Chapter 9: Heartbroken

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Bulls-eye.

On my first try.

That's gonna make people suspicious.

Oh, crap.

Eric is heading over.

He arrives and motions for me to unplug my ear protection.

I'm screwed.

"Can you tell me," he starts. "How abnegation transfers are always so good at dauntless?"

"I don't know what you mean," I play dumb. "This is my first try."

"Don't lie to me initiate," he growls.

"I don't lie," he gets what he gives.

"Eric, leave the stiff alone," Four interjects.

I have never been so grateful for Four. This side of Four seems, almost human. He seems more real. I haven't seen this, Tobias-like behavior, from Four, ever. He seems close to the boy I fell in love with.

"And why should I do that, Four," Eric spits the name like an insult, and I know why. He knows that Four is Tobias. And he's going to hold his name, his names, over his head.

It makes me sick.

I glare at him. So does Four. Even Eric can't stand both of our glares combined, even Marcus couldn't.

"Do it again, stiff. Then you're off the hook."

I do.

Bulls-eye.

---------- Line Break named Fredward Davis to lunch -------------

"How'd you do that?" Chris asks.

"Do what?" Playing dumb again, I know it's unoriginal.

"Shoot like that," Al aids.

"It's almost mathematically impossible to get a bulls-eye on your first try."

"Almost is the key word Will," I answer. "and your Erudite is showing."

"Sorry," he answers back.

"But that still doesn't explain you being AMAZING at shooting."

Chis won't leave it, will she.

"I don't know. I have 20/20 vision, maybe that's it."

"No," Chris rejects.

"what are you doing?" Al asks.

"I'm just relaxed."

"Just relaxed?"

"Just Relaxed."

I'm lying to them. I'm anything but relaxed. I have lost my best friend. I have lost my boyfriend. Eric is always watching me. I'm on edge. I'm scared. I'm divergent. But most of all, I'm

Heartbroken.

This one sucks, I know. I'm sorry. I added a cast. I am just at one of those in between parts when I know where this is going but I don't know how to get there. Please Vote Comment and read. Just bear with me for now, please. This is also being written at 3:07 am eastern time in the U.S. Love the big apple almost as writing.

Happy Memorial Day. God Bless all the fallen heroes. Love you grandpa.

Thank you and love you!!! You guys are such great readers!!! Also the pictures bellow showed up while I was looking for a quote background and I thought they were fitting.

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