The Perfect Ten

By VaehC3703

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Tris has just finished her initiation. She's having a hard time getting used to all the dauntless. But mostly... More

Rage
Uncomfortable
Taking It Slow
Self-conscious
IM SORRY
Anger
Bloody Nuckles
Wow
Night Out
Love
The Morning After
Dinner
Our Future
Doctors
Stress Reliever
Bath Conversations
Okay...
Kids
Playful
CT Scans
Christmas
Insecurities
Past
Comfort
Surprise Visits
Fight For What You Love
The Story
JUST PUSH IT OUT!!!
Eloped
I Can Be Romantic When I Try
Dance Unless Youre Not Got Getting It
Sweet Sweet Dreams
Stay Out Of That Area Of My Life
So Now You Want To Touch Me?
Why Can't You See It
Sicky
Marcus Freaking Eaton
For The Love Of God
Please Wake Up
Heart Stopping
WE CAN'T DO THAT!!
Baby???
ITS NOT MINE!?!
Who's Is It?
Try Again
Surgery
Lasts Too Long
Normal
You Relax Me
Serum
Tear In My Heart
Friendly?

What The -

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By VaehC3703

                 Tris's POV
     I finish doing Al's tattoo that's on his arm. He's muscular, but not anywhere near as buff as Tobias.  He was flexing his arm the whole time because every time I'd turn around he'd relax it for a few seconds. 
     "I'm done," I tell him. I did a candor symbol and a dauntless symbol.  He sits up and let's me wrap his arm up.  His face is way to close to mine.  This boy needs to get a hint.  I'm in a relationship for God's sake. 
    I pull back, but at the time I do he grabs my face and pulls my mouth to him.  His lips move against mine.  Mine aren't moving though.  He pulls away.  He looks hurt but I don't care.  I slap him. 
     "Leave!" I yell at him. He does and I leave soon after,  closing up.  I know I have to tell Tobias about this and I'm concerned about how she will react.  ××××××
      "Tobias!" I call out when I get home.  He walks up from the living room with my parents behind him.  Wait!  What!?!  Fuck. 
     "Sweety," my mom says and hugs me. I hug her back. I missed her so much. We pull away and my dad hugs me.  I smile at Tobias.  This is going to be eating me alive if I don't tell him soon.  "Um, Four, can I talk to you for a second?" I ask.  My parents stare from me to him.  He nods and we excuse ourselves to our rooms. 
      "Tris, what's happening? I don't want your parents thinking we're doing anything," he says.  I sigh. 
     "Al kissed me. I knew I had to tell you. You would be mad if I didn't," I tell him.  His expression goes cold,  and his hands bawl up in fists.  I touch it but it doesn't go away. 
     "He's dead," he says mostly to himself.  He pushes past me and goes to the living room,  making his way to the door.  Before he can open it I grab his arm.  I don't care that my parents are here and looking at us. 
     "Please, don't kill him," I say.  He would actually do it, even though that's one of his fears.
      "I'll try not too," he says.  Oh God. He leaves the apartment.  My family looks at me like I'm nuts. 
     "What?"
  
    

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