Kismat Virakhi Ki (Completed)

By Krithi_Shetty

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So this story will be written from the time Sai leaves the house . The cast and the background of the charact... More

Shock #Chap:1
Khel #Chap:2
Dard #Chap:3
Vinu ko kya huaa??? #Chap:4
Concerned #Chap:5
Pakhi ki Galti hai kya? #Chap:6
Vinu thik toh hojayega na? #Chap:7
Chale ??? #Chap:8
Virat Kider hai? #Chap:9
Care #Chap:10
Reality check #Chap:11
Dilemma #Chap:12
Pareeshaan #Chap:13
Dil se baat #Chap:14
Moments #Chap:15
Bacho jaisi harkat #Chap:16
Cravings #Chap:17
Emergency #Chap:18
Mission☠️ #Chap:19
Kaan Khichaai #Chap:20
Pakhi Vinu☠️☠️#Chap:21
Danger #Chap:22
Rakhsha kar #Chap:23
Worried #Chap:24
Pakhi kaha hai #Chap:25
Sambhaalke #Chap:26
Yaad #Chap:27
Vinu is unwell #Chap:28
Pakhi's Idea #Chap:29
Risk #Chap:30
Pakhi The fighter #Chap:31
Problem #Chap:32
Pakhi in dilemma #Chap:33
Happiness #Chap:34
Flashback #Chap:35
Naye rishte #Chap:36
Gift #Chap: 37
Ghar waale #Chap :38
Kya gift Mila? #Chap:39
Cranky #Chap:40
Virat- Vinu #Chap:41
Pakhi thik toh hai? #Chap:42
Hurtful.words #Chap: 44
Plan cancel #Chap:45
Taunts #Chap: 46
Baatein #Chap:47
Mansi gives a shocker #Chap:48
Pakhi's dilemma #Chap:49
Pakhi ko daant padi #Chap:50
Virat kaha hai ??? #Chap:51
Vinu😥#Chap:52
Aakhir rishta kya hai?? #Chap:53
Fishy feeling #Chap:54
Cute #Chapter:55
Play Time #Chap:56
Confused #Chap:57
Baharki #Chap:58
Mulaaqat #Chap:59
Badtameezi #Chap:60
Pakhi rejected the proposal #Chap:61
Truth #Chap:62
Argument #Chap:63
Suspend #Chap:64
Opportunity #Chap:65
Long night #Chap:66
Yashasvi Bhava #Chap:67
Concern #Chap:68
Held Hostage #Chap:69
Saviour #Chap:70
Kismat played it's role #Chap:71
Vachan #Chap:72
Khamooshiyaan #Chap:73
Decision #Chap:74
Breakdown #Chap:75
Emotional #Chap:76
Fever #Chap:77
Special day #Chap:78
New Entry 🤧 #Chap:79
Malavrao #Chap:80
Unknown Calls #Chap:81
Pakhi is not feeling well #Chap:82
Unconscious #Chap:83
Weakness #Chap:84
Virat gets angry #Chap:85
Hatti Pakhi #Chap:86
Cute Virakhi #Chap:87
A shocker for Vaishali and Shailesh #Chap:88
Pakhi reveals the truth to her parents #Chap:89
Pakhi toh gayi 😂 #Chap:90
Ruthna Manana #Chap:91
Kahani pudding ki🤪😝 #Chap:92
Pareeshaan #Chap:94
Morning #Chap:95
Discussion #Chap:96
Cranky Vinu #Chap:97
Manage #Chap:98
Bhavani's evil plan #Chap:99
Maha Update #Chap: 100
Cut Off #Chap:101
Virat is in Danger☠️ #Chap:102
Khoon #Chap: 103
Chale #Chap:104
Ghar se nikaal diya #Chap:105
Propose #Chap:106
Night #Chap: 107
Engagement ring Chap:108
Anshika's Naming Ceremony #Chap:109
Let go of past #Chap: 110
Engagement #Chap:111
Arrested #Chap:112
Handcuffed #Chap:113

Mansi's Concern #Chap:43

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By Krithi_Shetty

Every body goes down ***

Pakhi was alone in her room***

Ashwini takes Mansi aside**

Ash: kyaa hua Mansi tai !!! Aap achanak se !! Patralekha ko kheechte huye kyu laa rhi thi!!!
Akhir chal kya Raha hai aapke dimaag mein***

M: Ashwini!! Maine bola tha na bahar Patralekha ke baare mein log kya kya bol rahe hai!!! Mujhse yeh sab nhi Saha jaa raha !!!! Log toh itna gir Gaye hai!! Ki usse bazaru aurat wagera bol rahe hai!!! Aisa bol rahe hai!! Ki pata nhi kiski galti ko Patralekha apne kookh mein rakh diya !!! Mein cha ti hu!! Ki uska bhi ek khushal parivaar ho!! Woh bhi ache se settle hoye !!! Isliye maine !!! Uske liye ladke dekhna chalu kar diya !! Hai!!

Ash: tai!!! Yeh aap kese kar sakte ho!! Kya Patralekha ko iske baare mein pata hai???

M: woh toh waise bhi !! Ha nhi bolegi!! Par hum ladka select karke !! Phir usse batayenge !! Mujhe vishwaas hai ki woh humari pasand ko nhi nakaregi!!!

Ash: uske aai baba ki toh sehmati honi chahiye!!!

M: Usme woh mere sath hai !! Unhe isse koi ahtraaz nhi hai!!!

Ash: Aur vahini ka kya????

M: Unko sath Dena hai toh de nhi toh mein Patralekha ki shaadi karungi chahe woh sath de ya na de!!!

Ash: par vahini vinu ka kya?? Usko toh Patralekha ki zarurat hai na ???

M: toh kya vinu ke liye Patralekha apna jeevan kurbaan kare !!! Pehle hee uske liye Patralekha ne bohut kuch Saha hai!! Dheere dheere pakhi aur vinu ko alag rhne ki aadat ho hee jaayegi!!

Ashwini doesn't says a single word and goes from there ***

Mansi goes to pakhi's room and sits besides her ***

After 2-3 Hrs ** pakhi gets her consciousness back***

Mansi gets happy: uth gayi tu!!!! Daara hee Diya tuune hume***
Kesi hai tu??? Tabiyat toh thik lag raha hai na???

P: Ho aai !!

M: abhi bhi dard hai???

P: Nhi !! Abhi thik mehsoos kar rhi hu!!!

M: mujhe maaf karde baada !! Mere dimaag mein hee nhi tha ki tere paero mein chot aayi hai!!!
Aur meine na jaane kitna dard diya tujhe !!!!

P: Aisa kuch nhi hai aai!! Mujhe pata hai aapka yeh iraada nhi tha ***

Virat walks in ***

V: tum uth gayi!!!!! Kesi ho ab??? Dard toh nhi ho raha na ??? 

P: ha mein bilkul thik hu!!!

Everyone gathers in her room ***

And talks to her ***

Pakhi sees vinu in bhavani's arms ***

Pakhi tries to gets up and sit ** Mansi and Ashwini help her ***

P: vinu!!!!

She asks bhavani to bring vinu ***

Bhavani gives it to pakhi**

P: Aawww !! Baby!!!!

Vinu smiles cutely ***

P: Miss Kiya mujhe !nn haa!n. She kisses him!!!!!

Maine bhi aapko bohot mishhh kiya !nn pareeshaan toh nhi kiya na !!! Badi aaji!!! Ko!!!

B: kese kare ga!nn itna laadla hai. Mera chup chaap tha mere sath***

Sirf ghurre Jaa rha tha***

K: Patralekha!!! Vinu ne toh kaku ke saareee bhi kharab kar dii!!! 😂😂😂

Everyone laughs at bhavani !!!!
Bhavani gives a glare to Karishma ***

Sonali: tujhe har waqt apna muh kholna hota hai!! Na !!!

What will happen next??
Kya Mansi ka plan successful hoga???

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