Before you guys proceed with the chapter I want to clear somethings!
I know Mahir's behaviour with Shravani is not good and inappropriate but me picturing him and their bond like that in this story was required for the story line! I have recieved many comments and PMs saying they aren't liking Mahir and all even some said they hate Mahir and he's evil and that was my trigger point! Hence I decided to clarify somethings!
First of all this is a fictional story not a real one! Secondly We can clearly see Mahir's changing behaviour which is very slight, slow and steady. I have read some Stories where a character named Mahir rapes Bela, does domestic violence, uses her physically and throws her out of his life.. that's fictional right but still you people are ok with it and even after all such things Bela loves him back then where did I go wrong?
Did I show anything which was over the top?
No!
Did I showed something really unrealistic?
Hell no!
Then if you guys are appreciating that Mahir and that Bela ( in other story) than you really don't have any damn right to accuse my characters!
Commenting your views and suggesting is your right but you really can't order me to do something because 'Honey I'm the ruler here!'..
And we have seen that the day Bela died that day Mahir screamed and shouted on Shravani accused her and in anger even pushed her, but not even once I repeat not a single time he raised his hands on her. He have been rude to her but most of the time he avoided her .. he provided her education, luxury and everything she deserved except his love and his time as he was still traumatized because of the loss of his wife and a/c him Shravani was the cause for this.
Then how can we say that Mahir is really wrong and something unrealistic?
You guys like my story go ahead but if your guys are here to bash me or my characters then sorry dude this is not the place for you!
Ok enough of my ranting, I hope I'm clear to those who have been asking me to show Mahir as evil at the last because that's never gonna happen!
To my dear ones I'm sorry for wasting so much time of yours but I guess this was necessary!
This is a STORY! A FICTION! Kindly take it as one!
Thankyou !
Happy Reading!❤️❤️
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Shravani: no Mihir... Meri wajah se dadda ne mumma ko kho dia.. Mahir ne apni Bela ko kho dia.. us din se sab badal... Badal Gaya.. dadda mujhse nafrat karne lage .. I miss him Mihir.. I miss my family.. my mumma... Sab meri... Meri wajah se hua hai... Sab meri... Me..rii... Wa..jah...
Her words were fading getting replaced with her sobs... Mihir couldn't even imagine the pain she was going through. He too had his own story but her story was dreadful... It was just so painful... She was suffering through so much... She was deprived of her father's love throughout all these years.
He just had the bits and pieces of her story but with that he could figure out that it was something big. Very big that changed her life completely.
Mihir: don't say like this Shravani... You're not at fault. Yeh hona tha islia hua... Isme tumhari koi galati nahi hai... Uncle ko Sadma laga hai...he lost his love Shravani.. he lost his first love... His wife.. his everything.. unse bardasht nahi hua.. aur unka sara gussa tumpe nikal gaya.. you're not at fault..
He said rubbing her back trying to comfort her but she was just crying her heart out. For the first time in her life she realised that she could talk to someone.. keep her heart out in front of that person.. she felt peace and comfort in his arms. And she didn't wanted to loose that ever.
Shravani: I want to get back my dadda Mihir..woh hoke bhi... Nahi hai mere pass.. I want him back in my life... Aur yeh shayad tabhi possible ho sakta hai jab sab pehle jaisa hoga ....
She said in a monotonous tone when he looked at her face which was blank. He cupped her cheeks and made her look at him.
Mihir: but that is not possible na .... ?
He asked softly when she smiled bitterly getting up and stood near the edge of the river.
Shravani: I wish yeh possible hota... Tumhe... Tumhe pata hai Mihir..
She turned towards him when he got up and stood beside her facing her ...
Shravani: I don't know why this trip.. it's giving me some intuitions as if sab badalne wala hai.. I had lost something big in my life which almost made my life a mess... I feel mujhe kuch asa milega jisse meri life bilkul thik ho jayegi . I am going to get back my everything.... Islia main is trip ko leke bohot excited thi..
She said holding his hand when he smiled cupping her cheeks.
Mihir: may be tumhare intuitions sach ho.. we never know..
She smiled looking at him and replied..
Shravani: that's why I want this trip to be the best of my life.. I want it special Mihir.. I .. really want it special..
She whispered as her eyes teared up....
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Mihir: I promise Shravani I will make this one so special for you that you won't forget it ever in your life.
He said with utmost sincerity making her assured as she did believe him hugging him close to herself.
The moon shined from the above reflecting the two so close to eachother which was beautiful and fascinating.
Mujhko barsaat banalo
Ik lambi raat banalo
Apne jazbaat banalo jaan
He thought determined to try every possible way to make this trip memorable for her while she completely dozed off in his arms making him smile.. as he picked her up and carried her towards the cap while with the the sun rose up behind them.
Mujhko alfaaz banalo
Dil ki awaaz banalo
Gehra sa raaz banalo jaan
Mihir sang sitting on one of the rocks while playing the guitar while every sat around him holding the morning coffee cups smiling at him hearing his soulful voice .
Nasha hoon main behakne do
Mere qaatil mujhe jeene ka haq toh do
Hearing his voice Shravani came out and just in cue his eyes fell on her. She smiled looking at him beautifully as he points his fingers at her and she shook her head smiling.
Mujhko barsaat banalo
Ek lambi raat banalo
Apne jazbaat banalo jaan
He got up walking towards her while a constant smile played on his lips.. and surprisingly Shravani didn't said anything nor did she got irritated instead passing him a warm smile she went away along with the other girls.
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Mujhe apne sirhaane pe
Thori si jagah de do
Mujhe neend na ane ki
Koi toh wajah de do
He layed keeping his head on her lap while she was busy reading a book .. he slided away the book when she smiled ruffling his hairs.
Mujhe apne sirhaane pe
Thori si jagah de do
Mujhe neend na ane ki
Koi toh wajah de do
She looked into his eyes which held pure love and affection for her.. the last night's incidents flashed infront of her eyes as she kept her palm on his eyes covering it making him smile.
Hawa hoon main lipatne do
Mere qaatil mujhe jeene ka haq toh do
They stood at the edge of river as she was still thinking that she really shared a great part of her life with him when his voice broke her trance and looking at him he found him forwarding his hand .
Mujhko barsaat banalo
Ek lambi raat banalo
Apne jazbaat banalo jaan
She smiled placing her hand on his when he pulled her towards himself making her shocked. She was about to say something when he tugged a flower behind her ear and touching it she smiled widely making his heart flutter.
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While everyone was enjoying in the back of mountains not finding Shravani Mihir started searching for her and finally after sometime spotted her standing infront of the fountain lost in her thoughts.
Tere sang guzar jaaye
Yeh unar jo baaki hai
Hass do na zara khulke
Kaahe ki udaasi hai
He moved closer to her to see her looking at the bracelet on her hand which was gifted by Bela. He understood that she was feeling low but the thing was he couldn't see her like this.
Tere sang guzar jaaye
Yeh umar jo baaki hai
Hass do na zara khulke
Kaahe ki udaasi hai
He sang lifting up her chin twitching her lips when she smiled slightly at his antics and wondered what have she done to get him.. all that matters to him is she herself.
Subah hoon main aane do
Mere qaatil mujhe jeene ka haq toh do
He went behind her holding her secured in his arms looking at the flowing fountain while she leaned back on him comfortably looking at the beautiful view.
Mujhko barsaat banalo
Ek lambi raat banalo
Apne jazbaat banalo jaan
Intertwining his hands with her he led her down the mountain taking slow and steady steps while she smiled looking at his face which was a worth site to see. She wondered how could she managed to avoid him all these months.
Mujhko barsaat banalo
Ek lambi raat banalo
Apne jazbaat banalo jaan
While all she gave him was ignorance, she always received love and affection from him. She finally realised that Mihir really loves her alot . And his life revolves around her and nothing else.
They finally reached the camp to take their bags.
" We are going to visit the two places nearby. Get yourself packed guys!" The guide announced while everyone nodded taking their bag pack and started for their walk.
They walked through the stone between the bushes. The green leaves and grass was a bliss for the eyes if Shravani. She couldn't help but capture each and everything in her way to the destination. While she was busy capturing the moments Mihir secretly clicked her pictures.
Shravani : atleast bol toh do I'll pose accordingly!
Shravani said the same line as he did the day before making him chuckle.
Mihir: candid have its own touch of beauty.
He said smiling to which she shook her head. They were walking towards their tent when they heard some commotion behind them. Shravani turned instantly but couldn't see anything but movement of leaves.
Mihir: kya hua?
Shravani: you heard that sound?
Mihir: what sound?
Shravani: arey aisa laga jaise yaha se koi gaya ho..
She said looking back here and there.
Mihir: maine toh nahi suni.
He shrugged when she looked unconvinced.
Mihir: you are overthinking come now.
He said pulling her with him but she kept looking back until she felt a hard chest came across her face. She looked up to find Mihir looking at her lovingly. His one hand was wrapped around her waist while her both hands were rested on his chest . The other hand of his travelled to her face and without her notice he tugged a yellow flowers behind her head entangled with her hairs . She touched the flower smiling when he clicked a picture of her. Hearing the sound she looked up and smiled as he stared at her enduringly. She couldn't help but feel overwhelmed and got on her toes kissing his forehead as he closed his eyes in bliss. This moment seemed like a dream to him but it was true.
Shravani: Thanks for making this trip so special for me Mihir! I owe this to you!
She said smiling as it really did became special for her. The moments , the memories and that feeling of hope was something she was craving for and she got it with Mihir. She wrapped her arms around him and he smiled blinking back his tears finally hugging her for the first time with her will!
~ To be continued ~
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