KARNA - MAHADEV'S DECIPLE

By karn0123

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I do not want hurt anybody's religious sentiments. This story is purely my imagination, what if karna in sear... More

MEETING MAHADEV
KAILASH PARVAT AND TRAINING
TESTS AND BOONS
FIGHT WITH INDRA DEV AND HOME COMING
RETURN AND ENCOUNTER
KALA PRADARSHAN
KARNA TALKS WITH GANGAPUTR
GANGAPUTR VS SURYAPUTRA
CORONATION
MEETING KURUVANSH
KARNA'S TALENT
KARNA'S MISCHIEF AND RASHMI CHARIOT
FIGHTING ASURS AND MEETING KRISHNA
SECRET IS OUT
KRISHNA'S MARRIAGE
RETURN TO HASTINAPUR
BHEESHMA KNOWS EVERYTHING
KARNA'S PUNISHMENT
VIJAYDHARI AND RASHMIRATHI
KARNA'S FAME
SIX MONTHS LATER
GUESTS ARRIVED AT ANGA
MAHASHIVRATRI
AVANTIKA GET TO KNOW ABOUT KARNA
VIKRAMADITYA'S REQUESTED ALMS FROM KARNA
TRAINING WITH KARNA
AVANTIKA TALKED TO KARNA
KARNA KILLING CHANDRASUR
KARNA TALK WITH AVANTIKA
BEFORE LEAVING FOR HASTINAPUR
KARNA GET TO KNOW THE TRUTH
KARNA GOT REALLY ANGRY
TWIST
ARDHNARISHWAR'S PUNISHMENT FOR DRONA
LEAVING HASTINAPUR
BHEESHMA REALISATION AND????
PROGRESS
JEALOUSY
ARRIVAL, DATES AND CELEBRATION
KARNA - AVANTIKA FUTURE PLANNING.
MAIRRAGE
RETURN TO ANGA AND ????
NEW DAY IN ANGA
SHOW FOR THE CROWD
ONE MONTH AND CONFESSION
HASTINAPUR'S CHANGE
BHEESHMA'S NEW DISCIPLE
KARNA - PARSHURAM TALK
VARNAVRAT INCIDENT
AFTERMATH
BIRTH OF PRINCE OF ANGA
AUTHOR NOTE
NEW STORY
SURYAPRAST AND INVITATION
VACATION AND ARRIVAL AT PANCHAL
SWAMVAR
RUDRA ANTICS.
PANDAVAS IN HASTINAPUR
DIVISION
INDRAPRASTHA
RETURN TO SURYAPRAST
RUDRA'S NEW JOURNEY
INVITATION
FLASHBACK
MEETING AND DISCUSSION
TURN OF EVENTS
RAJSUYA YAGNA
A/n
CURSE AND ????
RETURN
DWARKA
SWAMVAR OF CHARUMATI
RUDRA'S RETURN
AFTERMATH
BEGINING OF DOWNFALL
DYUT INVITATION AND ACCEPTANCE
ARRIVAL AT HASTINAPUR
Game
CHANGE OR INEVITABLE???

RETURN TO ANGA AND STEPS TOWARDS FUTURE

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By karn0123

Karna and his family left for Anga. They reached there by afternoon because of Rashmi. Karna then took them palace he told them rest as he was going to Vikram to see what all has happened in his absence. The elder couple went to room and karna went to Vikram as Sabha today would have ended. He found Vikram in work place, the treasury. They both talked and Vikram told them that every thing is fine the Kingdom is fine and smoothly running.  He also informed Karna that special spies are ready to be dispatched.

Later Karna came back to palace, his first and vital plan to bring change all across the aryavart will be starting now till now he was rebuilding his Kingdom. He gathered the spies. He told them go to all kingdom of Aryavart to gather information. He planned to gather information first till then he will train special elites to help common people of aryavart. He as a king cannot interfere in others Kingdom but he has promised to use his knowledge to help the oppressed and depraved. So first information gathering was vital. He also told them if they came across any orphan children, widows, or helpless people then they can send th to Anga. He will accept them and take care of them. He sent 10 of them to Hastinapur. 2 would be dasi of Dushala and rest will either mingle in crowd or work at palace. He has told Ashwatthama that he will be sending few dasi's to Dushala in near future befare Ashwatthama left his house. Ashwatthama was sceptical first but he accepted as he thought it was Karna ways to be with and know about her.

After talking and handling responsibilities to the spies he went to Army barracks and started training his army. He has already decided the first 1000 candidates for elite training before but till now he hadn't informed them or put through special grind. After training he gathered them and told them about his ideas. Most of people were the one who was oppressed or orphans due to various reasons. He gave them opportunity to decline but none of them backed off. Karna told them to report after army training from tomorrow to secret place for their special training.

After handling everything he did his Surya pooja and returned to palace to meet his parents. He went and knocked their room, they both allowed him to enter. When he entered the room he saw them in same commoner clothes with little to no jwellery. He smiled seeing that.

Karna : Are you comfortable here.

Radha : Not really, these luxury is making me uncomfortable.

Adhiratha : Putra we are not used to, having such clothes or jwellery. We are common people, all these are not for us.

Karna : Then don't wear them, there is no need. If it's making you uncomfortable.

Radha : Son, their aslo no need for thaes maids or cook we can do these things and cook for us.

Karna : Maa I know you can do that but let them help. If I remove them they will loose their jobs.

Radha : Fine, but they will only help if it's necessary otherwise they can do whatever their jobs are.

Karna : What did you all day today.

Radha : We went all around to see Anga. we roamed around here last time I couldn't as you father was in hurry. I am proud of you son. I heard from people what you did.

Adhiratha : I too am proud son but now what? What are you plans now.

Karna : I decided to build several ashrams now. The orphanage, widows ashram, old age people home. I planned to sent out my soldier all around Aryavart and bring the people in need here. We have large enough space till them if anyone came, they will stay in royal guests house. I want to help the people.

Adhiratha : What will you do once they arrived? You cannot feed them all their life, they would need to dependent on them selves.

Karna : Once they settled here they can choose what they want to do. I will send children to school, they will have same rights as other citizens of Anga.

Adhiratha : What if some spies were send disguised as them?

Karna : I have nothing to hide, Pitashree. if others want to infiltrate it's their opinion. I have never wished to go for war to expand Anga, I am happy with what I have here but don't worry my soldier will do a rough background check on them. I have promised my teachers to help the oppressed and depraved, I can't not do anything because of fear of spies.

Adhiratha : Putra there are several others who are helpless not just orphan, widows or old people.

Karna : I know Pitashree but they are the ones who are most easy target. I will try to help others too if I can.

Radha : Lets not discuss other thing. Lets have dinner.

The family then started eating together.

Radha : Putra, Did you inform Ujjain about us moving to Anga.

Karna : Mother I will send a messenger tomorrow morning.

Radha : I am happy, after all that happened finally happiness will be in you life. Finally I will se my son get married.

Adhiratha : Son, you are stepping into new phase of life, always remember to give you family equal te as your kingdom. Don't be lost in responsibilities of King and undermine the responsibilities you have and will have to you family. Remember balance is everything. You and your wife will be two wheels of your life's chariot.

Karna : I know Pitashree.

Radha : Putra, you should tell Avantika everything about you a relationship will not last long if you have secrets from each other.

Karna : Yes mother I will tell Avantika and when she and her family will come here.

They had their lunch and went to their chambers to sleep.

Next day Karna woke up did his pooja, donated alms and returned to palace. He went to sabha but firstly called a messenger there and gave him the letter he prepared for King Vikramaditya. Then sabha took place all things were discussed. He was happy his kingdom was getting prosperous, after all the matter ended he proposed his idea to build several ashrams in and around the city. He told them the reason behind it. The entire sabha just smiled and agreed. They knew the generousity of their King. They knew there wasn't any other king or ruler like Karna who thought about people then themselves. Others were busily hoarding the money of their Kingdom and to live in luxury some even were forcing their subjects through heavy taxation because of their greed but their King wasn't like that. Karna then asked Vikram about whether treasury have enough for this if not he will chip in. Vikram assured him it was enough for initial phase and it will only increase from here. Karna didn't need to any thing. Karna told craftsmen representative to inform his community about this and get started from Today if possible. The ashram will also have same structure as other buildings of Anga and people will be appointed and get paid by kingdom for smooth running of these ashram. As it will not only help deprived but also create job opportunities for people of Anga. The sabha then dispersed and Karna went to army. The army of Anga was now well versed in common vyuha and combat techniques, so Karna decided to up their training schedule.

After that the special selected 1000 people gathered in secret base. Karna named this force the “Nyay Rakshak” and he will the leader of this force. He told them it was just first recruitment of this force after them others will join them and they will have to train them as he will be training them. He told them their training will be brutal but after training they can atleast fight and retreat from any enemy. They may not able to battle Maharathi who was using divyastra, but below that none will be able to face them. He can't teach them divyastra as it was destructive weapons to be given freely and they didn't have yogic powers or ripu control to be given divyastra. But he will make them master of their weapons of their choice so much so that they can somewhat fight against divyastra with basics and manuvering of  their weapons. He told them they will perform duties in group of five. Their responsibility was solely to help common people and punish heinous crime such as human trafficking, slaving etc. They will be voice and strength of common people. He told them they will go various kingdom and will buit secret base there but their headquarters will be in Anga and they have inform twice every month. He told them they can recruit locals of their designated kingdom after through background check. He then started training them. He told them to choose their respective weapons after that he told the to form group with others who had similar choice of weapon. Five groups were formed with axe, mace, sword, spear and bows. Karna then strated advance training for them, they were part of army and Karna had trained them six months so basic of basic such as stance, grip of weapon, using of weapons were taken care of. Now he wants to learn advance manuvering. He will train them till they become one with weapon and it becomes natural as breathing to them which is final step of mastering weapons. He will train with them and spar with them till they can collective hold 3 hours agaist him. He will teach them how to counter or deflect various basic divyastra whic are commonly used. He even made special arrangements of their food from his pouch. He will also training them in various craftsmanship so that they can infiltrate without arousing suspicions. He will teach them to be casual till situation arrives otherwise any experienced warrior can spot them. Training concluded half an hour before dinner, Karna took half hour break for his pooja and alms. He told them to stay here only and practice, he made special schedule for them whic includes camouflage, poison counters, etc.  He told them they didn't need to report to army from tomorrow.

He left training area and went to palce, where messenger he send to Ujjain was waiting for him with scroll. Messenger gave him scroll and left. He went to his parents chamber and told them the reply has arrived. Radha was excited and told Karna to read letter for them. He opened the scroll and read it aloud. The message in scroll was King Vikramaditya informed him that he with his family will come to Anga after One and Half months. Radha was jumping in excitement and told them she will be begin preparing. She strictly ordered her husband and Son to be in their best behavior. They nodded as they didn't want to face enraged Radha. Karna has also send this message to Hastinapur. He wrote special letter to Bheeshma, Dushala and Ashwatthama.

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