Whew. I have to admit, the story developed a bit differently than planned. That depressed Italian bastard didn't make it easy for me at times. Just like Stella.
Originally, more humor had been planned. Maybe I'll get that into the rewrite at some point. Or I have to translate my crazy German story.
Maybe one or the other of you can tell me what was good about the story and what you didn't like so much.
How do you like the transformation of the two?
Was it okay to read more from the perspective of a mafia boss?
What would you have liked / what did you miss?
I'm always open to feedback, positive or negative, as long as it doesn't turn into insults.
There won't be a new story in English from me anytime soon. I still have to finish my other stuff and revise the two long German stories, because I really messed up the grammar there.But I will be around to read and answer your comments.
Thanks for reading, voting and commenting. 🥰