Book: Lost Destiny
Author: @JayanandaK
Reviewer: Mystic_Writer97
Cover:
The cover was very neat and mesmerising to look at, and it gives off the impression that it's an adventure story. Though, I think it would be better to make the font of the title more noticeable and bigger so that it's easier to read Title: I like it, it's very catchy and it caught my attention right away
Plot:
I think the dream concept was pretty interesting, evident to Kai who encountered an image of a mountain which was exactly from his dream, I think that alone gave him a purpose for his questions to be answered and to find out more about himself.
Grammar and punctuation:
I noticed many grammatical errors such as the lack of commas to break sentences and failure to put a period in every sentence. Moreover, there are also a lot of misspelled words which can be distracting.
Creativity and Originality:
I like the descriptions, it makes it easier for readers to visualize the scenes in the story. The plot was also creative because his dreams may serve as a huge turning point in his life.
Where to Improve:
I think it's best to improve on your grammatical errors like
I've mentioned before, so that readers won't grow disinterested at reading your story.
Review summary:
Overall, your story has potential because of your creativity in terms of the plot and writing skills in narrating. What should be fixed is the proper use of grammar.