Chapter 1. Clownanigans
- General book opening plot threads of Dindet's insecurities around size and hunger
Chapter 2. Sleep eater
-oliver tries to get Dindet's to sleep like a person it goes badly and he learns that she can shapeshift and also he gets paranoid about her past.
TAKE OUT THE SLEEP OVER SIDE PLOT PLS
Chapter 3. A very hungry thing
-same as usual but take out references to being sick because technically that already passed ^-^ allude to Oliver's negative and selfish intentions with Dindet (also make him slightly more poppy about stuff)
Rest goes as usual
Take out the last three chapters and move them somewhere else.
YOU ARE READING
CFYC PLOT AND ROUGH DRAFTING
Science FictionMoving things around. This is now a rough draft area for CFYC
