Poisoned Apple
mesoputamia
General Fiction
On-going
1. Book Cover — the book cover is really nice. Simple but alluring.
2. Title — the title is really nice, it's attractive. Good job!
3. Grammar — I think your grammar is quite nice, sometimes, you miss some words to describe the situation clearly but it wasn't that noticeable, and after all, we all make mistakes, we learn from our mistakes.
4. Contents — the story is very cool! Seriously! It's very unexpected (when you're going to see the book cover and title) but after you read the first parts, you'll say "Oh, wow, it's unexpected but obvious!
5. Overall Impact — it's a very good story! Like very-very! (STAN VERIVERY)
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Book Cover : 10/10
Title : 17/20
Grammar : 32/35
Contents : 25/25
Overall Impact: 10/10
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Total Score : 94/100
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