Mahal kong Aurora
BinibiningTiara
Historical Fiction
On-going
1. Book Cover — your book cover... It doesn't fit the genre at all but it fits the title. It's pretty thou...
2. Title — the first thing I said when I read the title is "This is very nice" (literally, I said that), because the title's very great, even considering the fact that we always use the word love, it seems like it doesn't sound cliche at all when we're using it's Filipino counterpart, and even if you'll translate it in English, it sounds so aesthetic.
3. Grammar — I suck at Filipino so I must say I'm pretty impressed by your grammar.
4. Contents — considering the fact that it's historical fiction, I'm pretty impressed by how you write it. The flow of the story is in right amount, it is beautifully written.
5. Overall Impact — it's great! You seem to be good at it... With some improvements that I can't pinpoint, I know you'll do a great job!
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Book Cover : 07/10
Title : 19/20
Grammar : 35/35
Contents : 24/25
Overall Impact: 08/10
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Total Score : 93/100
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Lay's Critique Shop 2020 (OPEN)
Non-Fiction[CLOSED-ON-GOING] Lay's Critique Shop 2020 WARNING!!! Inconsistent updates, busy si Lay (busy ako), do not call me Author/Miss Author/Miss A. Lay na lang (pronounce it in Filipino pronunciation, hindi Ley, okay? Lay talaga iyan...). H'wag maattitude...
