Taste of Reality
jaxsonjayson
Romance
On-going
1. Book Cover — I seriously like the book cover, thou I think it's a general fiction story based on the book cover, the book cover seems to be good for romance too... Love it!
2. Title — the title is a bit meh, thou... It's very enigmatic (mysterious) so it can pull someone to read it (in short, it's mysterious vibes made it alluring). Great job.
3. Grammar — I think you somehow have troubles in using past, present, future tenses. Please use comma instead of dash in pausing, it's more proper. I think how you blend English and Filipino is a bit terrible.
4. Contents — the flow is cool and nice. He seems a bit cold so it's understandable that the narrations are dull in his point of view so it's a good job! Thou you should lighten it up.
5. Overall Impact — it's a bit uninteresting... It's fine thou it won't really caught you in general.
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Book Cover : 09/10
Title : 17/20
Grammar : 30/35
Contents : 22/25
Overall Impact: 06/10
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Total Score : 84/100
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Lay's Critique Shop 2020 (OPEN)
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