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Hello there peeps! The results for Random are out thanks to our lovely judge -Navyah- who has been helping us a lot❤️. I want to thank her for putting up with our requests and making things work. Thank you Navyah! 🤗

So without further ado, let's jump to the results ↝

We will rise by AestheticLGBTQ

Cover: 9/10
Title & Blurb: 7/10
Writing Style: 13/20
Fluency: 6/10
Message: 8/10
Enjoyment: 9/10
Grammar & Punctuation: 9/10
Follow and Rules: 10

TOTAL: 71/100

Review:
Firstly, I appreciate the writer's strength to choose a platform for the thoughts developing inside. But the thing that I don't support is the writing style, way of delivering is over fire and language is not appropriate at places. Again, it's good to choose social topics for blogs and articles but don't be volatile while writing it down.

Don't give up because even if you can't win a place, you can always participate in the next round and win something better. 😉☺️

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The Last Moonchild by Sarai_uwu

Cover: 9/10
Title & Blurb: 8.5/10
Plot: 8.5/10
Protagonist: 4/5
Antagonist: 4/5
Supporting Character: 3.5/5
Anticipation: 3.5/5 Plot
Development: 8/10 Enjoyment: 9/10
Grammar & Punctuation: 5/10
Follow and Rules: 10

TOTAL: 73/100

Review:
This is a new storyline for me, so it was exciting to read it. There are some punctuation mistakes like lowercase of the first letter in inverted commas speech and after using exclamatory signs as well, you can edit that. Also, try not to leave unnecessary space after a paragraph ends or new pov starts. Overall, I enjoyed reading this paranormal type plot describing each character properly.

Congratulations you've won Runner-Up! Sarai_uwu 🤩

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Okay ready?

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The Hoodie Girl by XX_Flying_Pandas_XX

Cover: 8/10
Title & Blurb: 6/10
Plot: 8/10
Protagonist: 4/5
Antagonist: 4/5
Supporting Character: 3.5/5
Anticipation: 5/5
Plot Development: 8.5/10
Enjoyment: 9/10
Grammar & Punctuation: 9/10
Follow and Rules: 10

TOTAL: 75/100 (THIRD)

Review:
I liked the plot surrounding the pains and difficulties the protagonist goes through and still never fails to have that everlasting hope within. The chapters and description are touching. I'd suggest you think of an authentic name of the book, also I think you could have explained the physical features of the characters more. Overall, I enjoyed the book.

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FOR SECOND WE HAVE... (oh c'mon just follow along and do the drumroll. We know you are all excited to know lol)

A glimpse into the life of prostitute by Psr1403

Cover: 9/10
Title & Blurb: 9/10
Writing Style: 16/20
Fluency: 8/10
Message: 10/10
Enjoyment: 9/10
Grammar & Punctuation: 8/10
Follow and Rules: 20

TOTAL: 89/100 (SECOND)

Review:
This is a realistic blog of the protagonist. I didn't find it exaggerated at all. Words have been used carefully by the writer, hitting the readers right inside their hearts. You can work a little on the cover. Also, I'd suggest sorting the blog into paragraphs and using italics style when representing the inner thoughts of the protagonist, this makes the book appealing to eyes and the flow is maintained.

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Librettos by iamsayad

Cover: 9/10
Title & Blurb: 9/10
Writing style: 9/10
Fluency: 10/10
Message: 9/10
Grammar & Punctuation: 9/10
Creativity: 9/10
Enjoyment: 10/10
Follow and Rules: 20

TOTAL: 94/100 (FIRST)

Review:
This poetry book is worth reading as promised by the title and the beautiful description given by the poet. Word play is impressive, fluency and flow of each poetry are remarkable. Clear message has been portrayed with a description at the end of each poetry. I love the form, the shape that these poetries create.

Aha so that's it for today. Congratulations to all winners of the Random genre. We will be back for more! Please pm me, devianmisfit your emails so I can send you the stickers!

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