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*face palms* Smh

Bruh! Like for real???

What is so hard about having your character's outfit match the time of the year??

Either it be the middle of the fuckin summer and ya character got on a damn sweatshirt

Or....

It be December and ya character got on a pair of fuckin shorts

-_- fuckery at its finest

I understand it may be hot (or cold) in reality when you type the chapter, but YOU have to pay attention to ya own story details

If you take forever to update (which I do a lot) then people like me are probably gon go back and read the story from where it seems familiar or from the beginning, and if that happens then little details and shit start popping out and confusing all of us

In chapter 1, the character got on shorts and a crop top, but then in chapter 10 (a.k.a 4 months later) they still wearing damn shorts

BUT! here's the thing... In chapter 1 it was the summer time, and school out.... SO! When we fast forward 4 months, it should be cold as a muhfucka outside by that point... You tryna give ya character pneumonia or something?

Basically: count how far ahead you've skipped and put ya character on some suitable clothing for that time of year

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