Talking Shıt

#10

I need better details about ya characters, or you need to find out how to include it better... And y'all need to learn how to dress better

Give me something other than: I'm 4'10" I got a big ass, my hair is long and dark brown, my boobs are kinda small, I got curves in all the right places, I'm thick, not fat and I got hella swag. Oh and my mama black and Indian, and my dad is black and Brazilian. I don't give a fuck... I mean if two characters are having a conversation and their ethnicity becomes a topic of discussion, then that's fine.

Then y'all be talking about they got "swag" but when I see the outfit (picture or description), that shit don't go. Either the character looks like a pink curtain (or any other ONE color) without a trace of a second color, or they look like a fucked up rainbow. Or they live in the hood, barely paying bills and buying food, but they got on some true religion jeans, a polo shirt, some brand new jordans, and they got a new phone (typically the latest iPhone)... Like how in the fuck is all of that possible??? Somebody got their priorities all fucked up

P.S. I've already said what I had to say about ya character body type

Moral of the rant: if you don't know how to dress or make ya clothes match... Just say they got dressed and grabbed what they needed. Also! Add little details about characters through dialogue or monologue