𝘳𝘰𝘴𝘦𝘧𝘢𝘸𝘯-'𝘴 𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘳𝘺.

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rosefawn-

⤷ interesting plot (10)

100 percent! i loved it so so much! i was hooked from the start to the end and honestly, i want more!

+ 10 points

⤷ organization (10)

the story was very organized! everything flowed nicely. there was never a moment where i was confused or had to go back and read a sentence again.

+ 10 points

⤷ detail (5)

it was very detailed and descriptive! i loved when you described sootypaw's feelings, cats' eyes, and cats' fur!

+ 5 points

⤷ amount of words (5)

the limit was somewhere between 1,000-1,500, but you didn't say how many words you put.

+ 4 points

⤷ turned in early (2)

not this time, but it's fine!

+ 0 points


in total, you have received 29/30! good job! next time, remember to list the amount of words you used!

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