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Mature Themes: Some swears and brief mention of a stalker, no heavy mature themes
LGBTQ+: No
Status: Halfway Completed (Updates twice a week, Should be completed in November)
Description: Meg is absolutely, 100% okay with her mediocre life as a cashier at Rob's Coffee Express- even if she does get called 'love' by her boss one too many times . She's okay, that is, until her BFF Abbey wins tickets to BABEL's stadium tour. Singularly known as Brendon, Aidan, Brian, Eric and Lachlan (and yes, at least one of them did legally change their name in order to fit the audience-voted acronym), BABEL is the world's latest pop sensation, and their multi-platinum album is all Meg has heard through the paper-thin walls of her room for months.
Dreading her upcoming evening being serenaded by BABEL in the hot seat-and recorded in full wide screen glory-Meg isn't expecting chance encounter with one of BABEl's stars, albeit in disguise. Proudly not a 'babbler', Meg doesn't recognize him...at least, not until he's front and center stage.
When a series of misadventures leads to a fling between Meg and Tim, the media are quick to brand Meg the new 'it' girl....only to turn on her when gossip site The Goss gets wind of Tim wanting to leave his unbreakable contract and break up the biggest band since The Beatles
Will Meg and Tim be able to cope with the extraordinary pressures of fame? Or will Meg and Tim love last as long as a candle in the wind?
Review
Summary/Blurb/Description:
The blurb here really called out to me, I usually have this happy and giddy feeling when I'm reading the blurb of a good story.
This blurb gave just the right amount of info needed to hook me on to the story.
There have been some cases in the past where the actual story wasn't as good as the blurb but this is not one of them.
But, I didn't like the length of the blurb, it was a little long. A blurb is better when its short and catchy.
Summary Rating: 8/10
First paragraph of the first chapter:
This part is actually very important
If you ever bother to read my book you'll realize something, I started with a conversation, or more like an action.
From my point of view I believe a story is just a telling of a section of someone life or your life, you just pop in and out. It feels more natural when you start with a conversation, although I still appreciate the monologue to introduce the character. Everyone has their preferences
First paragraph of the first chapter Rating: 9/10
Plot:
The plot is quite beautiful, although some people would say it is cliché. Poor town girl meets Rich Boy Band member.
I remember seeing somewhere of how a cliché is very beautiful when used well, although I haven't read quite extensively (Which I would do later), from what I've read so far the story seems to go in the right direction, she handles the plot properly.
This is actually a good plot, like I said earlier; what matters is the way the author uses it
Plot Rating: 6/10
Cover Relevance/Design:
The cover has a microphone as the background image, although I think she could have done way better with the cover.
It seems a little bland and not all enticing; it's not appealing to the eyes.
Cover Relevance/ Design: 5/10
Dialogue/Description:
The dialogue was pretty good, I was quite impressed with the description too, she let us use our imagination and gave adequate descriptions of the surrounding when it was necessary.
Because I don't think a book really needs to describe how a counter at a coffee shop looks, it's annoying when some writers do it. Yes, we want special tit bits not a whole story of where everything in the room is located.
Dialogue/Description Rating: 7/10
Interaction with Readers:
Perfect, she even replied to reading requests in her comments and she was very nice while doing that.
Interaction with Readers Rating: 9/10
Grammar/Spelling:
Impressive, I'm not a grammar king or spelling freak but I normally get irritated when I see too many mistakes in a book. Yes, I know mine isn't perfect but I believe we should all try to write well. This book has very few mistakes here and there but most of them are not even that noticeable.
Advice to writers: Even if you don't edit your books properly before you publish ut, I feel you should read over it once at least.
Grammar/Spelling Rating: 7.5/10
My Opinion:
I feel it's a great book and has the potential to go far if she follows her writing pattern, unfortunately I've seen some stories where the first few chapters are good then they start drifting towards a poor writing style and plot. Although I doubt this story would be one of them
My Rating: 23/30
Overall Book Rating: 7.45/10
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