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Oreo Review - Carrie Blood Of Redemption

(2) 9/10

Well, it's a fanfiction story so it's only normal for it to be named Carrie. I like the fact that blood of redemption was added to the title. It adds that creepy side to it.

I had a look and when you search Carrie your book is actually on the top 15 which is a really nice thing.

(3) 6/10

Alright, your blurb ok. The words you used and the punctuation, in general, are a bit confusing and some sentences are awkward. Much like in the last review I posted, the structure is just wrong. It's like a really big, chunky paragraph - it just isn't appealing to the eye. I feel sleepy just by looking at it.

I suggest you take a look at the last review I made. There I explained how to structure a blurb step by step by separating the paragraphs accordingly. You can do it this way: you start by a sentence, then you have an opening line at the beginning, then you have the middle, then you have 'the towards the end' and then, finally, the end.

Another way to structure - it's like this (Example from one of my favorite books on Wattpad):