The Mystery of Ariella

Chapter ∞: The Wrap Up

I am sorry to say that but i am deciding to delete The Mystery Of Ariella off of wattpad.

Wait.. before you click out.. read:

I know I know... all of my hard work for nothing... 5,000 reads?!?! i never thought it would get so high. This is alll because of every single one of you. But the truth is i dont have time to update... and some of my first chapters need serious editing and-plot-hole-filling there are so many questions that have been brought up and dropped. Not to mention the lack of accuracy in things ive discribed (jury, judge, the whole trial, schizophrenia, modern asylums, etc.)

When I am finished with the book... editied and all with a final conclusion... I will repost it again, chapter after chapter, like ive done... But since it will be done i will be on time.. every 5 days a 5 page chapter-and it'll be great-i promise you that.

I just dont know how long that's going to be.

And i rather have the best story possible on here rather than some ameture plot, grammar, spelling, character dialouge, character development, and over all pace. So i am saying goodbye... for now but to those who are angry... If anyone still cares... here's a summary on the whole story. and ill post some key chapters i thought you would like after this "chapter"

Summary:

After Ariella, Cy, Jaime, and Penelope decide to escape things start going into motion. Cy and Ariella continue to talk through their passage.. about everyhting-the past, the future, to whats going on right now. They decide that to be able to get a good veiw on the front room, someone's going to have be sent to the afermary, to be passed through the room to get a good look at it. Ariella plans to swallow a bit of pure alcohol to posion herself. In the following week a group of kids try to jump the fence in broad day light-resulting to Jude shooting them in the head with a pistol. Ariella gts scared but Penelope hands her the master key she stole from her guard. She finally shows Cy and they celbrate mixing a bit of their alcohol in the soda can jude gave her when she first woke up from being electricuted. 

        Mean while, Jude meets up with Gabriel about the progression of their army of teenagers. Calling them cured and blessed. Cy and Ariella become wildly drunk and they are both forced out of bed the day after by their guards, the hole uncovered and exposed. They get carried out to the pavillion  where the group of kids were shot. Their hands are tied behind their back and guards take turns beating them with various tools. Before it's over Jude gives an excuse not to kill them "we have no evidence they were actually trying to escape." So he tells Ariella to continue to punch cy till he begs for mercy-if she doesnt he will be shot. Then she gets an idea. After a couple shots, she pushes him to the floor and crawls on top of him. She pulls him up and starts kissing him, a move so absurd it takes everyone moments to comprehend what's happening. SHe's pulled off him and sent straight to Section 3... Deep section 3. She is tossed in a room with a man about 19 years of age... one that looks famoilaar. 

        Days pass and during converse with the stranger she finds out he is actually Ross. Not dead, not missing. she asks what he did to get into Section 3 but he blows the question off.

        Weeks pass and Ariella and Ross hear yelling come from the hallways... Screams of a guards. Cy yells for her name down the hallway and he finds them locked in that small room. Ariella convinces Cy to let Ross come with them. They fight through a crowd of gurads in an epic end of the book battle scene and escape the asylum when day breaks. The run for the city and the three girls take a train to Ariella's old town. Cy and Ross go and look for a car to borrow from a friend. They also go find new clothes and shoes for themselves and the girls. 

        The girls reach Mags house expecting one of Jude's teens to be there. But surprisingly no one is... They meet Mag and catch up before Gabriel breaks in quietly through the window and grabs mag while she's in the kitchen and the girls are in the living room. He comes up with a knife to her throat and threatens to kill her if Ariella didnt come with him; and Penelope and Jaime return to the asylum. 

        Through the banter, the door opens, Gabriel freaks out and cuts a slit into Mag's throat before a gun shot is heard. Through the screams, Ross runs to catch Ariella as she falls, Cy lowers the gun, and Gabriel falls on the floor, a bullethole between his eyes.

        They provided them with clothes found at a thrift shop. Cy has had his hair cut, and now it almost looks pure white-he claims it's naturally that way and it's the first time he's washed it in years but Ariella thinks it's bleached.

Ariella greives over her grandmother's death, Cy saw Gabriels car outside of the house and he knew. They ''borrowed the gun and car from a friend and hurried their way over here.' just in time.

        Cy suggests to burn the house, and they do, reminding them of the day Ariella's parents died. 

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there you go.. that's the gist of the story im going to post the last chapter and my new trailer in the next chapter so stay tuned for the last!