confession??

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mithali : babhi u know tomorrow we will have to leave to goa as we have only one week left and we r going to celebrate all the functions over there 

neil : what tomorrow? 

mithali : yes 

neil : but this suddenly ? 

avni : and y did u not tell us in the morning , i mean i could have arranged few things 

neil : dont worry avni anyhow we r not going tomorrow 

mithali : what ? r u mad ? no way , if u dont want to come its ok , but babhi will come with me tomorrow 

neil gives her a r u serious look 

neil : r u even for real , i mean i am ur brother and u r telling me it is ok for u if i wont come ??

mithali : i know u will defintely come , of course not for me , for babhi atleast (she smirks)

avni gets red due to shy 

avni : mitali plse i have some work and i promise i will come day after tomorrow plse 

mithali : offo babhi u dont need to work , u know u rthe owner of ur company now , so do hell with the work and ur boss too 

avni : but mithali 

neil : yes mithali we will come day after tomorrow 

mithali : no u people r coming tomorrow thats it i dont want any excuse to hear now   

avni : but mithali 

voice : will u not come even if i come ?

they turn towards the voice and gets surprised , avni runs to the person and engulfs her in her arms 

avni : maaa ?? u here?

avni looks at swetha who was behind neela holding the wheel chair the one where neela was sitting 

neela : ha bacha i am here , ur mom in law brought me here along with neil , even though i refused they did not let me stay there alone 

neil : yes maa how can we let u alone stay there when our whole family is here ?

avni was in tears by now , she was very very happy 

swetha : haa neela ji and how can we leave u alone here and celebrate our daughter's marriage in goa ? and haan even though i am angry on both of u (pointing towards neela and avni), i had to do this (she says faking anger 

neela : but what did we do swetha ji ?

swetha : neither u nor avni told me about u being our family and avni how dare u to tell me the truth ? what did u think that i am very cruel ?

avni : mummy ji ?(tears in her eyes )

she hugs swetha very tightly letting all her tears out 

avni :  thanku mummy ji , thanks a lot 

swetha :hmm well thanks ur hubby , he is the one behind all this , he wants all our family to stay together 

avni looks at neil lovingly and then back at swetha 

swetha : so r u ready now 

avni nods in yes 

mithali : yayyy , i am so happy , so neil now u too go and get ur things packed as we all r going to goa tomorrow coz i hope u will come with us now (she winks after teasing him )

avniel gets embarrassed 

swetha : ok ok now leave this and avni go and get ur things packed beta 

avni just nods and leaves to her room followed by neil 

neil pov : today i saw something for me in avni's eyes i hope she will give this marriage a chance and love me as the way i love her , today i will confess my love 

he goes to their room and finds her packing her bag , he clears his throat , avni looks at him 

neil : avniii 

avni just keeps on staring him making him more nervous

neil : i want to say something to u 

avni just nods her head staring into his eyes 

neil : avniii 

avni nods her head encouraging him to say 

neil : avnii i ---- i -- i --

avni : hmm (feeling nervous )

avni pov : oh no what does he want to say ? i hope he is not saying i love u to me , but y my heart wants to listen those three words , coz i got mad , tell na neil , y r u stammering making me more curious and nervous 

neil : avni , i -- i --lo

just then his mobile rings and he gets frustrated as well as avni , neil then looses all his strength and picks the call , he talks to the other person very angrily showing his frustration on the other person , while avni continues her work , packing her bag 

after the call just goes and sits on bed 

avni pov : huuh duffer , u r such a dumb avni , how did u even think that he is going to propose u ? huhh anyway i will not ask him what he wanted to say me ,if he wants he will only say 

neil pov : stupid dd , how i wish i could kill him now , huhh anyway i will propose avni tomorrow 

neil : avni will u plse pack my bag too ? if it is ok for u , i am having some work i should finish it 

avni nods her head in yes making him smile 

avni packs their bags and gets on to the bed and fell asleep as she was really tired 

neil looks at her , admiring every inch of her face , he pecks her forehead in most loving way and she smiles unknowingly making neil happy 

neil pov : how i wish i could kiss u when u r awake ? i want to feel u in my arms forever, i hope the day will come soon avni 

he sleeps beside her , close enough to her but with a appropriate distance 

next morning avni first wakes up and finds her in the most intimate way with neil , she finds her leg entangled with his and his one hand on her waist while the other was under her head as she used his hand as a pillow , she turns onto deep red looking at their position but immediately gets scared as she doesnt want to get caught by neil in this position 

she ties to wake up but alas he wakes up by her stirring and looks at the most beautiful sight infront of him , avni very close to him , their lips were inches apart and bodies were in the most intimate position , he loved avnis expression , she widened her eyes the moment he opened his eyes and her cheeks were red and she was absolutely looking ravishing , he just wanted to kiss her then and there senselessly 

neil slowly comes out of their compromising position as he doesnt want to make her embarrassed or uncomfortable , avni runs to bathroom while neil smiles at her 



sry for the late update and @Innocent_soul101 , dear i hope u like this update 

and guys plse do vote and comment , thanks for all ur love and support 

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