Dear reader,
Hi, I was hoping one day to get my work publish and I would really love some feedback.
Is the plot coming together nicely or is it confusing? Is it predictable and cliche?( I hate predictable and cliche) what do you think about the characters? Especially the main protagonist? Is she too unlikable that you can't finish the book? what about the world building? Is it boring without suspense? what about info dumping?
Any comments with constructive criticism is muchly appreciated.
your truly
Paris Mckay
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Book Of Age(the Dawn age)
Teen Fiction"A mere puppet dancing to each jerk of those unseen string. Trapped in your own mental prison and can never see the world for what it really is". The world is one,united by an elite few. Where divine rights gives them the power to rule all others an...
