Review for ' Regretful (Hiatus)' by CAMILAUNIZER
1.Cover: The cover is pretty, but it could be much better. This looks more like a horror story, because of the feel which the cover has. You get a 7/10 for this.
2.Blurb: The blurb is really nice, the conversation is adorable! It really could be a bit better honestly, maybe just add more questions. And leave more lines between the questions and conversation. You get a 8/10 for this.
3.Start: The start is really nice, her thoughts are realistic. The length of paragraphs is perfect. You get a 10/10 for this.
4.Grammar: There are a few grammatical errors. Read the chapter once, you will spot them easily. The punctuation are perfect. You get a 9/10 for this.
5. Uniqueness: I really liked the story line, its about discovering who you really are, tough decisions one has to make in his/her life. You get a 10/10 for this.
Overall score:44/50
Shy💞
