Review for 'Made for each other ' by PRINCE_SACHIN
1.Cover: The cover is absolutely amazing! You get a 10/10 for this.
2.Blurb: The introduction is really short and has lots of scope of improvement. You get a 6/10 for this.
3.Start: Well, the start is nice and simple. It would be really simpler to read if you would start the dialogue's on the new line. It looks quite clustered this way. But the dialog's are easy to read, and in simple words. You get a 8/10 for this.
4.Grammar: There are quite a lot silly mistakes. Like, you have called the teacher as miss and sister as didi. And I would advise you to read it and I am sure you will be able to spot them out! You get a 7/10 for this.
5. Uniqueness: I liked the concept of adding song lyrics and the change in POV. The latest chapters are much better than the starting ones. You get a 7/10 for this.
Overall score: 38/50.
• For a 13 year old you are doing a great job. You should keep updating •
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