Review for "Imaginary Friend" by SarahsStoriess
1.Cover: The cover is really pretty! But it could be so much more, there could be the colour red used, as it will give a more spooky feel. And there could be her parents or the camp shown. You get a 7/10 for this.
2.Blurb: The blurb is just perfect, it gives the whole plot of the story in just a few lines. Its to the the point. And is very eye catching! You get a 10/10 for this.
3.Start: The start is just amazing! It is really well written, its elegant and to the point. I wishes the chapters where a bit longer. The paragraphs are also perfect. You get a 9/10 for this.
4.Grammar: There are some silly grammatical mistakes, read the chapter once and surely you will be able to spot them. You get a 9/10 for this.
5. Uniqueness: This concept is very different and eye catching. Its a mix of thrill and horror and mystery. You get a 10/10 for this
Overall score: 45/50
•Just make the chapters a longer and update often. Sorry for the delay •
Shy💞
