Author: thisisgospel012
Book: Dark Devotion
Genre: Fanfiction, Romance, Fantasy.
Description: Quinn has finally made it to senior year at J.R. Holiday Boarding School. She's shy, awkward, and just doesn't fit in. At the beginning of the new school year she meets Andy Biersack. He's tall, dark, and handsome. Everything a girl wants in a guy. One day she unveils a dark secret about him. She gets swept into a world of dark creatures and the supernatural. She also gets tangled into a massive war between good and evil. Andy and the Wild Ones are her guide through this dark dimension. Will she make it out alive or fade into the night?
~ ~ "So if you guys aren't fallen angels, you must be pure angels."
His dark smile twists my stomach. "No, no," he chuckles. "We're much worse." ~~
Rating overall: 10/10
Grammar rating: 7.5/10
Punctuation rating: 8/10
Plot flow rating: 10/10
Descriptions rating: 9/10
My personal thoughts to you: I really like your story, like a lot. I see a few errors in spelling and punctuation here and there, but it's still quite an enjoyable read. I think the plot is really interesting and it keeps me wanting to read more. So you're doing a great job.
In other words, update please, XD.
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