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(Prepare to have your brains melted guys)

  ok so like i said this iks my first story be nice plz (I'm not very nice sorry c:)

btw its set afte rsunset so (So you set this story down after a sunset?Good to know)

ThunderClan (Fairly good spelling so far.I know I'll end up being wrong in the future,though)

Leader: Firestar - ginger tom with a flame-colored pelt

Deputy: Brambleclaw - dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes

Medicine Cat: JayFeather-gray tom (Wait...did we fast forward in time to about book 4 or 5 of POT?)

Warriors:

Squirrelflight - dark ginger she-cat with green eyes

Apprentice, Foxpaw

Dustpelt - dark brown tabby tom (Eye colors disappear after Duspelt)

Sandstorm - pale ginger she-ca (What's a ca?)

Cloudtail - long-haired white tom

Apprentice DaisyPaw - cream long-furred cat from the horseplace (Wait...what?)

Brackenfur - golden brown tabby tom

Sorreltail - tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat with amber eyes

Thornclaw - golden brown tabby tom

Brightheart - white she-cat with ginger patches

Spiderleg - long-limbed black tom with brown underbelly and amber eyes

Whitewing - white she-cat with green eyes

Apprentice, Icepaw

Birchfall - light brown tabby tom

Graystripe - long-haired gray tom

Berrynose - cream-colored tom

Hazeltail - small gray-and-white she-cat

Mousewhisker - gray-and-white tom

Cinderheart - gray tabby she-cat

Poppyfrost - tortoiseshell she-cat

Honeyfern- light brown tabby she-cat

Lionblaze - golden tabby tom (WHAT)

Hollyleaf - black she-cat (THIS IS JUST AFTER SUNSET!!WHERE DID THEY COME FROM?!)

FoxHeart-reddish tabby tom

IceFire-white she cat (Not the correct name,but it's pretty nice)

ToadRibbit-black—and-white tom (Just wow)

RoseFlame-dark cream she cat (Also not the correct name,but it's still now)

BriarStorm-dark brown she cat (Wait...did BriarLIGHT,BumbleSTRIPE,and BlossomFALL exist at this time?)

BumbleFlower-very pale gray tom with black stipes (Such a manly name)

BlossomWind-pale brown she cat iwth a dark stripe along her spine

Apprentices:

Fox DaisyPaw - cream long-furred cat from the horseplace (I-I don't even know)

FlamePaw-firecolored she cat with one grnee eye one blue eye (Eye colors come back hooray)

LakePaw-bright blue gray she cat with blue eyes

The last 2 r starKits siters (They're Starkit's babysitters?)

JazzPaw-red she cat with blue eyes and a black tail (Cats aren't smart enough to know what jazz is)

Queens:

Ferncloud - pale gray (with darker flecks) she-cat with green eyes mother of Dustpelts kits

Dawnsparkle-bright tortishell she cat with garguntan blue eye's mother of Jayfeathers' ktis, formaly of Shadowclan (OK.Just no.Several things wrong with this.Cats don't know what the heck sparkle is,Jayfeather is breaking the warrior and medicine code *I think*,gargantuan is spelled wrong,Starkit's mother has REALLY big eyes,and formerly of ShadowClan?Just...I don't even know.)

Kits:

StarKit-graysh-blue-and purple she cat with molting orange eyes and a white star on her forhaed (What?!Grayish-blue is a fur color,but not purple!Also,WHYYYYYY)

Elders:

Longtail - pale tabby tom with dark black stripes, retired early due to failing sight (Eye colors disappear again)

Mousefur - small dusky brown she-cat

Weaslepelt-big red tabby he cat with bight yellow eyes (hes Rowanclaw's dad, he came to Thunderclan when Dawn- did0 (...What?Also eye colors come back)

LeafPool-brown tabby she cat (What?!Leafpoo's not old!)

ShadowClan

Leader: Blackstar - large white tom with huge jet-black paws (Eye colors disappear I'm getting sick of this already)

Deputy: Russetfur - dark ginger she-cat

Medicine Cat: Littlecloud - very small tabby tom

Apprentice, Flamepaw (ginger tom)

Warriors:

Oakfur - small brown tom

Apprentice, Tigerpaw (dark brown tabby tom)

Rowanclaw - ginger tom

Smokefoot - black tom

Apprentice, Owlpaw (light brown tabby tom)

Ivytail - black, white and tortoiseshell she-cat

Apprentice, Dawnpaw (cream-furred she-cat)

Toadfoot - dark brown tom

Crowfrost - black-and-white tom

Apprentice, Olivepaw (tortoiseshell she-cat)

Kinkfur - tabby she-cat, with long fur that sticks out at all angles

Ratscar - brown tom with long scar across his back

Apprentice, Shrewpaw (gray she-cat with black feet)

Snaketail - dark brown tabby tom with striped tail

Apprentice, Scorchpaw (dark gray tom)

Whitewater - white she-cat with long fur, blind in one eye

Apprentice, Redpaw (mottled brown and ginger tom)

Tawnypelt - tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes (Eye colors back)

Flamewind- flame color tabby tom with green eye's

Tigerclaw-huge dark brown tabby tom with long claw's and amber eys

DawnFeather-cream tabby she cat (shes a different cant [Can't?] then the one in tC ok?) [That doesn't mean I won't confuse her with Dawnsparkle.Actually,that's impossible.Dawnsparkle's name sticks out like a sore thumb.Eye colors disappear again]

OlivePaw-bright brown she cat

Queens:

Snowbird - pure white she-cat

Elders:

Cedarheart - dark gray tom

Tallpoppy - long-legged light brown she-cat

WindClan

Leader: Onestar - brown tabby tom

Deputy: Ashfoot - gray she-cat

Medicine Cat: Barkface - short-tailed brown tom

Apprentice, Kestrelpaw (mottled gray tom)

Warriors:

Tornear - tabby tom

Crowfeather - dark gray tom

Owlwhisker - light brown tabby tom

Whitetail - small white she-cat

Nightcloud - black she-cat

Gorsetail - very pale gray-and-white cat with blue eyes (Came back)

Weaselfur - ginger tom with white paws (Disappear)

Harespring - brown-and-white tom

Leaftail - dark tabby tom, amber eyes (Came back)

Apprentice, Thistlepaw (long-haired white tom)

Dewspots - spotted gray she-cat (Disappear)

Apprentice, Sedgepaw (light brown tabby she-cat)

Willowclaw - gray she-cat

Apprentice, Swallowpaw (dark gray she-cat)

Antpelt - brown tom with one black ear

Emberfoot - gray tom with two dark paws

Apprentice, Sunpaw (tortoiseshell she-cat with large white mark on her forehead)

Heathertail - light brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes (Come back)

Breezepelt - black tom with amber eyes

Elders:

Morningflower - very old tortoiseshell queen (Disappear.You know what I'm not doing eye colors anymore.You get the point;of course she'd be in the elders den is she's old)

Webfoot - dark gray tabby tom

RiverClan

Leader: Leopardstar - unusually spotted golden tabby she-cat

Deputy: Mistyfoot - gray she-cat with blue eyes

Medicine Cat: Mothwing - dappled golden she-cat

Apprentice, Willowshine (gray tabby she-cat)

Warriors:

Blackclaw - smoky-black tom

Voletooth - small brown tabby tom

Apprentice, Minnowpaw (dark gray she-cat)

Reedwhisker - black tom

Mosspelt - tortoiseshell she-cat with blue eyes

Apprentice, Pebblepaw (mottled gray tom)

Beechfur - light brown tom

Rippletail - dark gray tabby tom

Apprentice, Mallowpaw (light brown tabby tom)

Graymist - pale gray tabby

Dawnflower - pale gray she-cat

Dapplenose - mottled gray she-cat

Pouncetail - ginger-and-white tom

Mintfur - light gray tabby tom

Apprentice, Nettlepaw (dark brown tabby tom)

Otterheart - dark brown she-cat

Apprentice, Sneezepaw (gray-and-white tom)

Pinefur - very short-haired tabby she-cat

Apprentice, Robinpaw (tortoiseshell-and-white tom)

Rainstorm - mottled gray-blue tom

Duskfur - brown tabby she-cat

Apprentice, Copperpaw (dark ginger she-cat)

Queens:

Icewing - white cat with green eyes, mother of Beetlekit, Pricklekit, Petalkit, and Grasskit

Elders:

Heavystep - thickset tabby tom (Playin' a Heavystep card)

Swallowtail - dark tabby she-cat

Stonestream - gray tom

Alright,so the overall grammar in this actually wasn't too terrible.Just a few typos here in there (apart from the author note in the beginning),so this technically wasn't as bad as I thought it would be.OK.I can live with this.

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