I'LL COME BACK: A Narnia Fanfiction

Chapter 5 - Lost in the Woods

"Do you see him now?" Trumpkin mocked. Amethy punched him in the arm, making him shut up.
"I'm not crazy, he was there! He wanted us to follow him" said Lucy, stamping her foot impatiently.
"I'm sure there are many lions in this wood, just like the bear" Peter said simply.
"I think I know Aslan when I see him" rebutted Lucy.
"Look, I'm not about to jump off a cliff after someone who doesn't exist..." he was cut off by Amethy's glare and Lucy's eyes had turned red.
"The last time I didn't believe Lucy, I ended up looking pretty stupid" Edmund said slowly, looking at Lucy then Amethy.
"Why wouldn't I have seen him?" questioned Peter.
"Maybe you weren't looking. We all weren't" replied Amethy.
"I'm sorry, Lu" Peter said.

Peter turned to walk away, followed by Susan and Trumpkin. Edmund gestured to Lucy and Amethy to follow behind. Amethy put her arm on Lucy's shoulder, leading her towards the rest, while Edmund followed behind.
"You know, I'm sure Aslan will come back. Perhaps now's just not the time" Amethy said, trying to comfort Lucy.
"Thank you" replied Lucy, her lips tugging up into a smile. She looked back one last time, hoping that Aslan could show himself soon once again.

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After a long walk yet again, they had finally reached the ford at Beruna. However, a disappointing sight greeted them - a large group of Telmarine soldiers were busy cutting down trees for timbre to build a bridge across the water. As they hid behind a bundle of logs to avoid getting caught by the Telmarines, Amethy felt her fist tighten.
"How could they? I mean, the trees are living things" she whispered.
An hand rested on her shoulder, patting her twice. She turned to face the person who had done that. It was - to her surprise - King Edmund.
She instantly felt a warm sensation creep up her neck as her face almost collided with his. They froze for awhile, their faces in close proximity. After much awkwardness, Edmund started with what he wanted to say.
"I... uh... just wanted to help you calm down" he said, rubbing the back of his neck.
Amethy giggled softly at his awkwardness.
"Perhaps this wasn't the best way after all" Susan stated.
"Come on, let's go back" Peter said, waving his arm towards the forest.

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They reached the gorge again where Lucy had seen Aslan, but it was still empty as before.
"So where exactly did you think you saw Aslan?" Peter asked Lucy.
"I wish you'd all stop acting like grown-ups. I didn't think I saw him, I did see him"
"I am a grown-up" muttered Trumpkin.
"It was right around..." Lucy started, taking a few steps towards the edge of the cliff.
The ground under Lucy collapsed at her step and she let out a loud cry. The others rushed over towards her worriedly, only to see her sitting safely on a ledge just a few feet down.
"...here" she finished, smiling up at them.
There was a path going slant wise down to the gorge between the rocks. The path was steep, narrow and made of slippery moss covered rock, making the decent extremely dangerous. They started to walk down the path cautiously to cross the gorge. Peter was in the front, followed by Trumpkin, Amethy, Edmund, Lucy then Susan. To keep along this path wasn't easy, but they made it to the bottom at last, with the roaring of the stream below getting louder and louder with each step.

They crossed the gorge below by stepping on small protruding stones, which didn't help keeping much of their feet dry. Amethy took a step back to let a little frog hop by, as she loved and respected all animals, whether talking or not, causing her to stumble into Edmund who was right behind her. She lost her balance and fell back.
She closed her eyes and let out a soft scream, expecting a splash and her whole body getting soaked with water. She didn't mind though, as I have said before, she loved the water. Instead of coming into contact with a cool and refreshing water, strong arms clasped around her body, carrying her bridal style. She was rather disappointed, actually. She opened her eyes slowly and it met with chocolate brown ones. It was Edmund. Their eyes locked and they froze. Amethy blinked profusely at his intense stare.

"Ahem" Lucy coughed from behind them.
The two recovered from their staring.
"You two are blocking the way" Susan pointed out.
They both blushed. Edmund set Amethy back on her feet roughly and cleared his throat before walking ahead.
Lucy followed Edmund, smirking at Amethy as she walked by. Amethy rolled her eyes. Susan came along from behind Amethy.

"So... what's going own between you and Edmund?" She asked in a sing-song voice.
"Nothing?" replied Amethy awkwardly. "But if you want me to be honest... I think he'll make a great friend" Amethy said truthfully.
Edmund, who was strolling ahead of them, frowned upon hearing her comment.

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Hi guys,

Yes I know I haven't been writing such parts after each chapter for the previous ones, but I'm starting on it from now on!

Firstly, I want to apologise for the previous chapter (the one before this) as it wasn't very interesting, was it? I'll try to add more parts with Amethy's participation :)

Secondly, I hope that you guys could spare a minute or two to comment on my story so that I know how I could improve on it and make it better. This is my first time writing a fanfiction, so I'm rather unsure myself. Your feedback would really help me a lot.
(Comment below!)

Thanks for reading and have a great week ahead!!

With love,
Tricia <3