Author: b00ks0verb0ys
Book: The Four
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Title: - 4/5
Your title is very intriguing and unique. I haven't found a connection from it to the story yet but then again I'm only four chapters in. Nonetheless I can't wait to see how you incorporate it!
Cover: - 3/5
Your cover is very visually pleasing, again with this I am not sure how it connects yet, but I am excited to see how you incorporate it.
Grammar/Punctuation: - 3/5
Your grammar is really good, some of the first lines in the prologue were a little difficult to understand but other than that it all looked good!
Characters: - 9/10
I like how you have built up your characters, I like how Athena is sarcastic and just how she thinks through stuff, and I like Nevian has a mysterious yet funny side to herself. I don't really have anything I couldn't really think of anything I would change.
Blurb: - 12/15
Your blurb is very descriptive and intriguing, I like how you pull the reader in by ending the blurb in a question. I can't say yet if you will have included everything that you put in your blurb, in your story, but so far it looks good. The only thing I would change is that you put quite a bit of important information in the blurb, which is nice but then it leaves less to be discovered for the reader. But that's just a personal opinion though, so you do not need to change anything if you don't want to.
Plot: - 8/15
The plot isn't really clear at this point but so far it looks good.
Pacing: - 18/20
Pacing seems pretty well so far, again it's hard to tell as I am only 4 chapters in but you seem to be taking your time and paying attention to the detail.
Creative Visualization: - 20/25
I love your creativity that I saw in the blurb explaining how her friend is an agent trying to recruit them and although I haven't seen much in the book I am excited to continue reading!
Total - 77/100
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