Captain's Review Club (HIATUS)

🍋 Week 2: REVIEW 🍋

WARNING: CONTAINS SPOILER!
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THE SCION OF LIGHT
By Acer_9722
Partner: KanaMikiWrites

So far, which character has had an impact on you and why?

― Abby, the heroine na di pala alam yung heritage nya. I love how this character is same as mine sa Half Demon na di talaga alam ang bloodline nila. It’s an exciting process para i-unveil nila ang pagkatao nila. I like how wholesome Abby was. Yung hindi brutal magsalita, walang halong asar and stuffs. She’s an angel indeed. Na-eexcite na ako kung sino ba talaga ang papa nya and anong ibig sabihin nung ‘don’t be consumed by the darkness’ na panaginip niya (sorry if mali ang naremember but it’s like this). 

I love her relationship with her mother. I can relate to this 100% (love na love ko din mama ko and I respect her). Habang binabasa ko yung short encounter nila kasi 3 chaps lang, I can see how genuine their love is. Ayaw niya iwan ang mom niya but her mom knows na gustong gusto niya yung school na yun. It’s saddening pero they remained strong for each other. Ito yung gusto ko, yung di lang puro hambog yung bida hehe. Basta nakakakalma yung POV ni Abby. Like hindi ako naiirita kung pano siya mag-isip. Kudos to author, nagawa niyang ilagay sa character si Abby.

Would you want to go to the story’s world, visit, or perhaps live there? Why?

― Probably magvisit lang. The place is detailed to look like nasa heaven ka though hindi masyadong na-detail. But it is how I imagine it. I wanna experience Abby’s experience kasi syempre wala yun dito haha (obv). Visit lang ang gagawin ko kasi apaka heavenly nung place, hindi ako nababagay dun. Mafefeel ko lang pagiging makasalanan ko pag tumagal ako dun. Like maguguilty ka nalang sa lahat ng nagawa mo. I also wanna see real angels kahit once in my life lang. Gusto ko din libutin yung buong AU kahit one day lang. I’m pretty sure napakaganda doon.

Do you think the point of view chosen by the author is good? 

― Yes, it’s good. Kasi mas macucurious ka sa story with someone’s POV like Abby na dinidiscover palang ang mga bagay bagay. Like dinadala niya tayo sa journey niya. Para tayong nasa shoe niya, makakarelate tayo sa magiging feelings niya as the journey goes by. That POV will bring us more emotions na nararapat natin ma-feel as mga baguhan tayo na papasok sa AU. It also adds mystery to the story, we learn about the other characters base on Abby’s perspective. 

What did you think of the book cover and the title?

― Title: Napaka-unique and I love it. I like the term Scion. 100/10 ka dito Author napakacreative ng mind mo. Share creativity braincells please. Keep the title as it is. Nakakacurious siya and interesting, title palang yan.

― Picture used fits the story. But, I suggest you change the font for the title and it’s placement. It is readable but too delicate and I think generic yung font. I suggest you find good fonts from DaFont and Fonts101. Pati na din pala sa author’s name to make it readable. 

Overall, kudos to the story, plot, title and flow author. You have the potential.

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HALF DEMON
by TakahashiKazumi • KanaMikiWrites
Partner: Acer_9722