Well these are in the wrong order, turns out the last chapter was not an update on previous I just forgot to post a chapter, well whoops lmao.
Here's what it was meant to have improved on
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Just imagine you didn't read the previous, read this, then go back and read that and be like omg the improvement!
(Please) /j
