Hello my lovelies🫶🏻
As you know from reading this story, it is not the best. The plot is quite rushed, the grammar isn't the best and nothing really exciting happens, so for that reason I was wondering if anybody would be interested in reading a new version?
It would still be an OC x OC story, however the face claims will most likely change, as well as the names.
The characters may not stay as part of the Feder and Lamansoff family, but rather someone else.
Also, the characters would have better character building and a backstory so that you can get to know the characters better.
Please let me know if you would be interested in reading a new book as I would love to write one 🌷
If you have any suggestions leave them in the comments and I will try my best to incorporate them into my story ♥️
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First Feder • Grown Ups
FanfictionIn which Lenny and Roxanne have a 17 year old daughter... In which Eric and Sally have a 17 year old son... In which their fathers basketball coach dies and everybody is reunited and the two 17 year old teens are introduced. Liliana Feder is a beau...