Ambrosia Awards 2023

Results- Science Fiction

Stealing Mars by OloosDomain

1.) Cover: 4/5

2.) Title: 3/5

3.) Blurb: 6/10

4.) Opening: 7/10

5.) Grammar: 13/15

6.) Writing Style: 12/15

7.) Characters: 14/15

8.) Storyline: 16/20

9.) Overall Impression: 4/5

Total- 79/100

I had the pleasure of reviewing "Stealing Mars" by @OloosDomain, and I must say that it is a book that showcases several commendable qualities. With its engaging plot, fitting cover, and thoughtful narrative choices, it offers readers an enjoyable science fiction experience.

First and foremost, the plot of "Stealing Mars" captivated my attention. The story unfolds in a captivating manner, keeping readers engaged and eager to discover what happens next. The author skillfully crafts a narrative that blends elements of suspense, intrigue, and imagination, making for an exciting reading experience.

The book's cover is well-designed and befitting of the science fiction genre. It immediately captures the essence of the story, enticing readers and setting the tone for the futuristic world they are about to explore.

One aspect that impressed me was the author's attention to detail in delivering context. The narrative provides ample information and background, ensuring readers are well-informed and able to fully immerse themselves in the story. However, I would suggest spacing out long paragraphs to enhance readability and flow.

Furthermore, the author displays skill in distinguishing the protagonist's thoughts from the dialogue by employing italics. This stylistic choice adds clarity and helps readers differentiate between the protagonist's inner musings and the spoken interactions, enhancing the overall reading experience.

While the book demonstrates many positive attributes, I would like to offer a gentle suggestion regarding dialogue placement. Starting dialogue in the middle of a paragraph can sometimes be confusing for readers. By providing clear separation and beginning dialogue on a new line, the flow of conversation can be improved, allowing for better comprehension.

In conclusion, "Stealing Mars" by @OloosDomain is a professionally crafted science fiction book that excels in its plot, description, and narrative choices. The fitting cover, engaging context, and well-distinguished thoughts and dialogue contribute to a satisfying reading experience. I recommend this book to fans of the science fiction genre who enjoy immersive storytelling and an imaginative journey through the cosmos.

X0X0 by ADZIthepoet

1.) Cover: 4/5

2.) Title: 2/5

3.) Blurb: 6/10

4.) Opening: 7/10

5.) Grammar: 11/15

6.) Writing Style: 12/15

7.) Characters: 15/15

8.) Storyline: 17/20

9.) Overall Impression: 4/5

Total- 78/100

I had the pleasure of reading "X0X0" by ADZIThePoet, and I must say that it is a book that left a positive impression on me. With its new cover, delightful humor, well-developed characters, and thoughtful formatting choices, it offers readers an entertaining and engaging experience.