Ambrosia Awards 2023

Results- Science Fiction

The results for Sci-fi are out! Thank you CrimsonShadowMask.

Note- Since there are only 4 entries, only 1 winner is announced.

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Olympos by Lilian-Lin

1.) Cover: 3.5/5

2.) Title: 3/5

3.) Blurb: 6/10

4.) Opening: 7/10

5.) Grammar: 14/15

6.) Writing Style: 12/15

7.) Characters: 13/15

8.) Storyline: 16/20

9.) Overall Impression: 4/5

Total- 78.5/100

I recently had the opportunity to review "Olympos" by @Lilian-Lin, and I must say that it is a book deserving of praise for its many positive attributes.

First and foremost, the cover of the book is simple yet elegant, capturing the attention with its understated charm. It sets the tone for the story that lies within and provides a glimpse into the world readers are about to explore.

One notable strength of the book is the author's adept use of vocabulary. The language employed throughout the narrative is engaging and demonstrates the author's skill in selecting words that evoke the desired emotions and imagery. This contributes to the overall quality of the story and enhances the reading experience.

The story description provided is commendable, offering readers a clear understanding of what they can expect from the book. It effectively sets the stage and generates curiosity, making readers eager to delve into the story and uncover its secrets.

While the dialogue in the book is generally well-executed, I would suggest avoiding placing it in the middle of paragraphs to prevent confusion for readers. Clear separation of dialogue helps maintain a smooth flow and facilitates easier comprehension.

The description of the setting is a notable strength of the book. The author's ability to vividly portray the surroundings allows readers to immerse themselves in the world of "Olympos" and enhances their overall reading experience.

To further enhance the book, I recommend spacing out long paragraphs to improve readability. Additionally, incorporating a broader range of vocabulary can add depth and richness to the narrative, engaging readers on a deeper level.

The presence of well-crafted cliffhangers keeps readers eagerly turning the pages, eagerly anticipating what will happen next. The clear context provided throughout the book ensures that readers are never left bewildered or disconnected from the story.

Character description is another strong aspect of "Olympos." The author excels in providing readers with a clear understanding of the characters, enabling readers to form connections and empathize with their experiences. The addition of humor adds another layer of enjoyment to the story, enhancing its overall appeal.

In conclusion, "Olympos" by @Lilian-Lin is a professionally written book that demonstrates the author's talent and dedication to storytelling. With its elegant cover, engaging vocabulary, intriguing story description, and well-developed characters, it is a compelling read. While a few areas could benefit from refinement, such as dialogue placement and paragraph spacing, these minor adjustments can further elevate the book's impact. I highly recommend "Olympos" to readers who appreciate a well-crafted narrative that blends humor, suspense, and captivating descriptions.