Suffer For Us - Developing Script

Chapter 4

Fast forward one or two years later 

Ext. Coffee Shop beside Jim's bakery (the Bliese  building apartment). The two brothers entered the establishment.

There's a poster on the window pane "closing out sale, 40% off on all beverages with purchase of pastry"

Jim has property papers of the coffee shop in front of him, he quietly reads it.

Robin: Within a y ear, the Bliese Bread empire is expanding. Finally trying to turn your bakery into a café.

Jim: (chuckles) Yeah. I hope you'll join in the ride as well. 

Robin: (gets giddy, taps on the table, and is itching to tell something) Another exciting news, did you check my channel? 

Jim: (looks at Robin) What is it? 

Robin: That every livestream I broadcast gets at least 10,000 plus views. I'm getting a huge following on social media and here in the city. 

Jim: (beaming) You see, what did I told you, a year ago, or was it two years ago? Also, I already know that. Even Sally keeps sharing your videos to her friends. Even Melissa at school.

Jump cut to flashback of Robin weeks earlier, in his small recording studio. Close up on what he types. On his computer, he makes a poll on his social media accounts and emails who is willing to attend his first ever concert in his home city. He explains in the description of the poll that  he needs to decide best if how big or how intimate his first concert should be. The rest who can't be able to attend will watch it via livestream.

Then he gets an update. He receives an email from a fan named Ocean. 

Dear Robin,

I am writing to you today as a huge fan of your music. I have been listening to your songs since you first released them on the internet, and they have always brought me so much joy. Your music has helped me through some tough times in my life, and I am so grateful for that.

I am so excited to see you perform live in your first concert someday.  I know that it is going to be an amazing show, and I will be so excited to be a part of it.

I am so passionate about your music, and I can't help myself. I have all of your songs downloaded on my phone, and I listen to them all the time.

I wanted to take this opportunity to tell you how much your music means to me. Your music has inspired me, it has made me laugh, and it has made me feel emotional.

Thank you for your time, and I hope to hear from you soon.

Sincerely,
Ocean

Cut back to Robin with Jim at the coffee shop. 

Robin: Check this fan mail I got (he hands a printed copy of the email)

Jim: You have this printed.

Robin: Yeah, I think I'll have that framed.

Jim:  She sounds like a great girl.

Robin: She could be 50 or older.

Jim: When exactly do you decide to have your first concert. 

Robin: I mean, if it ends up being intimate (cut to widescreen of the coffee shop) when does the Bliese Coffee shop open? 

Cut to them exiting the coffee shop. Two ladies pass by them. One of them calls for Robin.

Olga: Hey, Robin. I read your poll recently. I think it's great you're planning to have a concert.

Robin: Cool, I hope you'll be there.