So I'm rewriting the book but I need some advice so ill take any advice or constructive criticism just anything to help me make the book not cringy
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ESTÁS LEYENDO
Bart SIMPson
FanficREWRITING #4 in Bart Simpson the title explains itself but, Diana moves back to her hometown (springfield) after 2 years, to see her bestfriend Lisa.
Not part of the story
So I'm rewriting the book but I need some advice so ill take any advice or constructive criticism just anything to help me make the book not cringy