Ambrosia Awards 2023

Action/Adventure- Results

The characters are aesthetically pleasing, and the graphics are visually appealing, contributing to the overall quality of the story. The plot is well-crafted and immediately dives into action, with side characters introduced in a seamless manner. The dialogue is well-written and adds depth to the characters, making it easy for the reader to form an emotional connection with them.

Overall, Jackle Jim: The Hunt is On is an engaging and well-crafted story. The cover art and character aesthetics are visually stunning, and the plot is well-paced, quickly jumping into action. The side characters are introduced seamlessly, and the dialogue is well-written, allowing the reader to form an emotional connection with the characters. While there were some minor punctuation errors, the author's use of vocabulary is impressive.

Small Paws, Big Pride by TheWordArtistBooks

1.) Cover: 3/5

2.) Title: 5/5

3.) Blurb: 8/10

4.) Opening: 7/10

5.) Grammar: 13/15

6.) Writing Style: 13/15

7.) Characters: 12/15

8.) Storyline: 19/20

9.) Overal Impression: 4/5

Total: 84/100

Small Paws, Big Pride by @TheWordArtistBooks is an engaging book with a simple yet attractive cover and a brief blurb that provides some insight into the story. The book is action-packed, with the fighting scenes between the wolves being the highlights of the story. The use of vocabulary is impressive and adds depth to the characters and the story as a whole.

The author does a commendable job of introducing side characters and explaining the context of the story. However, there are some terms that can be confusing, and while the author does explain them well, it can become confusing when done in the comment section. To overcome this, the author could create a glossary with any unfamiliar terms or place all the confusing terms at the beginning or end of each chapter.

The plot is extremely interesting, with different characters that have varying personalities. The author gives each character their own distinct voice, making them relatable and endearing. The antagonist, Black, is a well-crafted character, and the author portrays his bullying tendencies perfectly. This makes the reader dislike the character and sympathize with the protagonist, which is a testament to the author's skill in character development.

Despite some punctuation and grammar errors, the overall quality of the story is impressive. The dialogue is natural and engaging, and the emotional connection between characters is evident. The author weaves a complex and engaging story, and the reader is drawn in from the first page.

In conclusion, Small Paws, Big Pride is an engaging read with well-written action scenes, effective characterization, and a complex plot that keeps the reader invested. Despite some minor errors, the author's use of vocabulary and ability to develop characters make this a must-read for anyone who enjoys a good action story.

The hunter song by OloosDomain

1.) Cover: 3/5

2.) Title: 4/5

3.) Blurb: 8/10

4.) Opening: 7/10

5.) Grammar: 13/15

6.) Writing Style: 12/15

7.) Characters: 13/15

8.) Storyline: 17/20