Chapter 10- Let's Try To Make It Right

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So, The Gang and I except for Jason were in Michael's office to try and build Eleanor's case for when The Judge comes.

"Now, I'm about to show you all some very sensitive information. The final point total each of you achieved for all your actions on Earth" Michael said.

He then pulled up a hologram of all our point totals on Earth, and here was our rankings from lowest to highest;

Tahani was in 321st place with 997,485 points.

Shinjiro was in 20th place with 1,420,690 points.

Chidi was in 16th place with 1,948,668 points.

I was in 7th place with 2,500,305 points.

And Eleanor was in 6th place with 2,513,654 points.

I looked at Shinjiro and I was about to make a joke about his point total as it had 420 69 in it, but he stopped me just as I was about to do so.

"Minako, If you make a joke about my point total, I'm breaking up with you" 

"Aw, dang it" I whisper.

"Woah, your point total was crazy high, Eleanor" Chidi complimented the Other Eleanor.

Eleanor laughed but then stopped and said, "Oh, sorry, 'Crazy High Eleanor' was my nickname in college"

Do I want to know how she got that nickname?

"Speaking of high point totals, Minako, your point total is also very high. How did you manage to achieve that?" The Other Eleanor complimeneted.

"Thanks! And for how I managed to achieve that, well... It's complicated" I answered, referencing SEES and Nyx. 

"I accidentally saw these point totals when Michael was fixing the sinkhole. It gave me an idea. We will apply the formula to Eleanor's actions here in the Good Place and if you earn enough new points, then we could argue that you should stay here" Tahani suggested.

"That could work, right?" Shinjiro asked.

"Don't know, never had to prove someone belonged here before. But the judge will be here soon, and this is the best way to build our case. Now, the average point total for a resident is roughly 1.2 million. Right now based on everything that you did on Earth, you have -4,008" Michael explained before giving a counter of Eleanor's points to her.

"That's not great, but I'm gonna do nice things for every goober in this place until my point total is so high I can rub it in all their smug faces" Eleanor said with a smirk.

A beep then came from the counter.

"You just lost five points" Chidi pointed out.

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In order to help Eleanor raise her point total, Tahani and I were helping her out with doing that, by telling her to hold doors for people.

"Hello! Hi, how are you?" Eleanor greets. "There has to be something bigger I can do than holding the door and waving. There's no way every Walmart greeter is in the Good Place" She grumbles.

"Wal... mart?" Tahani asked.

"It's a retail store" I tell her.

"Yeah, regular people go there. You haven't heard of it" Eleanor adds on.

"Look, I know this is tedious, but holding a door for someone is three points, and if you do it for everyone in this neighborhood, then that's almost a thousand points just for a start" Tahani convinced as I nodded in agreement.

"Exactly! And it's a good start too" I said.

"Besides, all the big ticket items are impossible, I'm afraid. It's not as if you could, 'you know, sacrifice your life to save others' or 'change the consciousness of a nation' both of which I did, by the way. Such fun"

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