The Autumn Awards Season 1 (CLOSED)

🌼 Poetry Results: Part 1 🌼

Hello and good morning, participants! 🤗❤

Thank you to our dearest judge Crepuscule_Dusk for taking her precious time to read and judge the books!

Without further ado, here are the results for Poetry entries:

1. Book: Papalubog na araw
    Author:  Liannenyl

Cover— 7
The problem is the color combination, much better if understandable yung title to catch the reader's attention. The background, it's fine.

Title— 8
What do we mean by Papalubog na araw, it means the end of the day and then lalabas na yung thought na tragic story ba 'to? Very good.

Blurb— 7
The blurb is catchy pero medyo iwasan lang ang repetitive words, hindi siya magandang basahin when it comes to poetries.

Anticipation— 10
Very good. Keep it up!

Plot— 13
The plot is connected to your theme and it's good!

Writing style— 12
Medyo naguluhan lang ako sa poetry mo, I don't know if malayang tula ba siya or what. Maybe you need more experience in writing, improve mo pa ang vocabulary mo and also the punctuations, mahalaga 'yon para alam kung saan titigil at ang katapusan ng linya. Yun lang!
Mood— 15
Maganda siya. Keep it up!

Enjoyment— 14
Maganda yung poetry mo, medyo naguluhan at nahirapan lang ako i digest, pero overall. Maganda, I'm sure na mag iimprove ka pa. Just keep on writing!

Total= 86

2. Book: Corazon Roto
    Author: Ajeanbluez28

Cover— 10
It's so catchy! Maganda at masarap sa mata. Simple pero binigyang hustisya yung background.

Title— 8
Hindi kailangan ng masyadong deep ang title pero catchy parin, mapapaisip yung reader tungkol sa content.

Blurb— 6
Ahm, na reveal na yung plot sa blurb. Mas maigi siguro na short description lang about sa content.

Anticipation— 9
Nakaka excite siya basahin! Ramdam yung kilig lalo na yung sakit sa dulo, keep it up!

Plot— 14
Kahit sa isang maiksing tula na express mo ng buo yung story, kumpleto yung plot! Maganda!

Writing style— 14
Maganda ang Writing style mo and

Mood—14
Maganda, keep it up!

Enjoyment— 15
Very good! Maganda ang kabuuan and nag enjoy akong basahin!

Total= 90

3. Book: Thoughts of me
    Poem: 15 Hakbang Sa Sakit
    Author: Sage_Xrachen

Cover— 9
Title—9
Blurb—9
Anticipation—9
Plot—15
Writing style—14
Mood—15
Enjoyment—15

Total= 95

From the book cover, the title and the content. This is such a masterpiece. Keep it up! You're a good poet, I can't say anything. Great job!

4. Book: Pieces of peace
    Poem: You Are Loved
    Author: empathyberry

Cover—7
Title—9
Blurb—10
Anticipation—9
Plot—14
Writing style—15
Mood—14
Enjoyment—15

Total= 93

Ang di ko lang nagustuhan sa Book cover is yung font, much better if you use plain and readable fonts? But the content? It's so beautiful. Keep it up! And keep writing!