Come One, Come All! 🍁
This book awards is made to support and aide Aspiring Filipino Authors in their crafts.
For this season, we are open for Short Story, One- Shots and Poetry entries.
STATUS:
❌- Accepting Entries
❌- Closed for Entries
❌- Judgin...
Book Cover- 4 Title - 5 Blurb - 5 Relevance to the Genre - 15 Plot Uniqueness & Creativity - 15 Writing Style - 15 Flow - 15 Enjoyment - 15 Overall - 15 Total: 99
Feedback:
Don't judge the book by its cover, they said and gladly, I applied it. Kasi kung oo, tapos binasa ko na iyong story mo, siguro mapapahiya ako sa sarili ko kasi sobrang ganda ng story. Description pa lang, na-catch na nito ang attention ko.
I love the way you narrate, the way you give justice to your characters, and etc. Matu-turn off na sana ako sa pagbabasa dahil sa fatayan/brutal ang story at mostly sa mga nababasa kong stories na gaya nito, fumafatay lang sila para cool. Para lang mabaliw iyong readers sa kaiisip kung sino ang killer. Pero noong nagpatuloy ako sa pagbabasa at nalaman ko ang rason ng killer kung ba't niya ginanon si Ellice, na-convince ako na meron talagang gano'n.
Book Cover - 4 Title - 5 Blurb - 4 Relevance to the Genre - 15 Plot Uniqueness & Creativity - 13 Writing Style - 13 Flow - 14 Enjoyment - 13 Overall - 13 Total: 89
Feedback:
The story is nice, advice ko lang na huwag nang i-bold iyong dialogues kasi may ibang nahihirapang magbasa sa mga gano'n at isa na ako ro'n.
Also, the words you used, masyadong makaluma, pero noong binasa ko, it seems like, they exist year 1990's na kung saan, may english na, tapos may kung ano-ano nang words.
Pagdating naman sa book cover, medyo pakilinaw iyong words kasi hindi mabasa.
Iyon lang, keep rocking with the waves 🖤💙 and keep it up, I'm rooting for your success.
Book Cover - 5 Title - 5 Blurb - 4 Relevance to the Genre - 15 Plot Uniqueness & Creativity - 15 Writing Style - 14 Flow - 14 Enjoyment - 13 Overall - 14 Total: 94
Feedback:
I love the book cover, plot, the flow and the title of the story. Medyo, pumalya ka nga lang sa writing style. Aside from grammatical errors na napansin ko, (which is, hindi maiiwasan ang grammatical errors in writing) kapansin pansin din ang paggamit mo ng bold fonts kada dialogues which is, no need nang i-bold kasi may quotation marks naman.
Iyon lang, keep rocking with the waves 🖤💙. I'm rooting for your success.
Book Cover - 5 Title - 5 Blurb - 4 Relevance to the Genre - 15 Plot Uniqueness & Creativity - 13 Writing Style - 14 Flow - 14 Enjoyment - 12 Overall - 13 Total: 90
Feedback:
The book cover and the title is great. Naano nga lang ako sa description. Naintindihan ko naman iyong sentences kaso, hindi ko malaman kung ano ang meaning non. Gets? Para kasing per paragraph, may ibang topic kaya hindi ko gets kung ano ang pinupunto ng description. Naintindihan ko lang siya noong binasa ko and ang ganda ng story, keep it up and keep rocking with the waves 🖤💙. I'm rooting for your success.
Book Cover - 5 Title - 4 Blurb - 3 Relevance to the Genre - 15 Plot Uniqueness & Creativity - 14 Writing Style - 14 Flow - 15 Enjoyment - 15 Overall - 14 Total: 94
Feedback:
The story itself is so nice. I like how you gave characteristics to your characters. I also love how you explained every detail of the story that made me enjoy reading. Medyo pumalya nga lang sa blurb/description kasi nakakalito-in my opinion, nakakalito siya.
Iyon lang, and keep rocking with the waves 🖤💙
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