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Shehnazz is sleeping peacefully...and then Navya screamed loudly in her ears..
Oyeeee sana uthjaa hum shimla pohnch gae hai..
Shehnazz immediately woke up.. And saw outside from the window..
Train was standing at the shimla railway station..
Oyee yr sachi pohnch gae hum to tum dono ne mujhe uthaaya kyu nhi kminooo..she said while making cute angry face..
Humne boht uthaaya tujhee but tu uthi hi nhi Navya said while putting her luggage Down..
Achaa tune niche utrna bhi hai jaa yahi train mei ghar bnaana hai..Aarav said Outside from the window..
Haa haa aai.. shehnazz take her suitcase and went outside..
Three of them stand outside of the railway station and start waiting for kmaal chaacha..
(Kmaal was the servant of rai family.. and he was the care taker of rai mension in shimla
And Navya and other children of rai family calls him kmaal chaacha)
Aarav - oyee Navya  tune to bola tha ki koi humein lene aaegaa but yaha to koi bhi nhi hai..
Navya - aare yr aajaaenge tu to aive hi deemag khaai jaara hai meraa..
Sana - navya yr tune aise hi uncle ko tang kiya hum kahi hotel mei ruk jaate..
And then a voice comes from behind..
Aree bitiya isme preshani wali kya baat hai..kmaal chacha said..
He took their luggage and put them in the car..
Three of them sits in the car..
Chaacha itnaa time kaha lgaadiya tha aapne
Navya said in tired voice..
Are bitiya vo na sidharth baba ne bhi aaj shimla aana hai to bs unke liye hi room ready krvaa raha tha mei..Kmaal replies
Navya - kyaa yrr bhaai kyu aa rahe hai ab she said in sad voice..
Shehnazz looked at Navya and asked..
Tera bhaai..?
Teraa to koi bhaai nhi hai na navu phir achaank se kaise aagyaa..
Navya- offo yrr real brother nhi hai but durr ke to ho skta hai naa bhudhu he is my cousin
Vo mere papa ki durrr ke cousin ka betaa hai
Sana - achaa diikhne mei kaisa hai hot hai kyaa?
Navya - ptaa nii yr childhood mei dekha tha tab to cute tha but av nhi pta kaise dikhta hai
Jo yaha hai nhi usse attention dena bnd kro tum dono..Aarav said
Navya - oh someone is getting jealous aahhhh..🤣
Jealous or mai chall naaa... Aarav said..
And then driver stopped the car infront of beautiful house..
Bitiya ghar aagya hai...kmaal said while putting luggage down..
Three of them come out from the car and runned inside the house..
Aarav - oyee yr merko to boht zoro se bhuk lagi hai while sitting on the sofaa..
Navya - ha ha ptaa hai bhukad terko kitni bhook lgi hai chl phle fresh hojaa phir karenge dinner iksath..
Chacha aap phle hum sbkoo room dikhaado or phir humaare liye dinner lgwa denaa.. Navya said  to kmaal..
Kmaal first shows to Aarav his room.. and then he Take Navya and sana with him
Sana - chaachaa yeh saamne wala room kiskaa hai while indicating her finger towards a big room..
Chacha - vohh to sidharth baba ka room hai..
Sana - haii.. mujhe rhnaa tha waha chl koi na
Kc - aree bitiya aap sad na hoiye aapkaa room to isse bhi sundar hai aapko boht pasnd aaegaa..
Navya- ha sana or meine specially vo room taiyaar krvaaya hai kyunki waha se shimla ka view boht sundar dikhta hai..
Oh sachi chl phir jldi waite kiska kari hai tu navuuuu.. shehnazz said in  excitement
And then they reached in their room..
Shehnazz first went in the balcony to saw the view..
She was totally amazed when she saw the beautiful view of shimla..
Shehnazz was sitting in the balcony and then Navya called her name
Oyee shehnazz niche nhi chlna kya tujhe dinner ke liye..
Sana went inside the room and laid on the bed..
Nhi yr mujhe nhi jaana mujhe sona hai mujhe boht nini aari hai..
Navya- are you sure tujhee kuch nhi khanaa..
Sana - haa while closing her eyes..
Navya - chal thik hai mat aa mai to jaari hu and then she went down..
And then shehnazz felt asleep..
After 3 hours shehnazz woke up becoz of hunger..
Oye navu uth naa yrr sunnn naa..she said while jerking her hand..
Kyaa haai sanaa kya mot aari hai terko.. Navya said in irritated voice
Merko bhook lagi hai shehnazz replies
To jaa naa mujhe kya bolri hai.. nav replied
Sana - Kaha jaau..
Is ghar mei na ik kitchen hai usme ik fridge hoga.. fridge mei khaana hoga to terko na dhyaan se kitchen mei jaana hai thik hai.. Navya said in taunting way..
Ha ha very funny..sana said and she went from there...
Abey yr yeh ghar itna bada hai kaha jau ik to mujhe yeh smjh nhi aata... and then finally she reached In the kitchen..
She saw someone shadow in the kitchen..
Shehnazz stopped and hide herself behind the wall..
Is time kitchen mei kon hogaa..koi choor to nhi..
She took a flower pot in her hand and stand near the entrance of the kitchen..
And then she heard a footsteps of him..
She was about to hit him with that pot but he stopped her in between he hold her hand tightly and pinned her to the wall..
Shehnazz closed her eyes in fear and was about to screamed..choorrrr
Sidharth puts his hand on her mouth..
Chor to mujhe tumhe bolnaa chahiye.. sidharth said in anger..
Shehnazz opened her eyes when she heard his heavy voice
She saw in his eyes....in his deep red eyes
Shehnazz was totally lost in his eyes..his warm breath falling on her face and then he again said..
Tum ho kon or yaha kyaa kar rahi ho.. his heavy voice get her back in the reality
She looked him top to toe he was shirtless
Shehnazz pushed him away.. and turned her face
Mai chor nhi hu Navya ki friend hu..she replied
Sid - dost ho to yun aise aadhi raat ko Bhatk kyu  rahi hoo..
Sana looked at him and gives him weird looks..
Sid - I know mai handsome hu aise ghurna band kroo and then he went from there
Sana was only staring him while going..
Kyaa ajeeb insaan hai..🙄🙄
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