Directions: Complete the meta analysis in-line. DM the comment topic response and general comment toSapphireAlena.
CRITICAL ANALYSIS (at least 5 in-line comments that extend through the entire chapter):
👍 or THUMBS UP—Elaborate why you think so.(at least one time each chapter—[MANDATORY])
☕ or NEEDS CAFFEINE—Elaborate why you think something can be improved—plot, characterization, grammar, etc..(at least one time each chapter—[MANDATORY])
💓 or HEART RACING (feeling excitement) [OPTIONAL]
😥 or TEARS (crying or feeling very emotional) [OPTIONAL]
❤ or HEART (love something, more than a thumbs up) [OPTIONAL]
😵 or CONFUSED (don't understand something) [OPTIONAL]
Comment Topic: Comment on the author's use of body language and dialogue to bring forth the main characters in the chapter. Min. length: 3 sentences. For this screening process, please post this response in a DM to SapphireAlena .
GENERAL COMMENTS: Remember that these are supposed to be reader engagement comments. Comment on characterization if it was well-done. Did a plot twist get you? Did something pull you out of the story? Most of all, if you're enjoying it, say so and say why. You may give editing advice for grammar, spelling, plot progression, description, and characterization. For this screening process, please post this response in a DM to SapphireAlena.
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An excerpt from SapphireAlena 's Open Novella Contest 2021 entry: The Colors of the Force. The blurb to the story:
Luke and Naluma have had a rough year, but their Force-bonded love has gotten them through the death of a student a few months earlier. However Luke's worried about Naluma, seemingly trapped at the Jedi Academy with three dozen Padawan driving her crazy in the dead of winter.
After a month of planning, he surprises her with a vacation for just the two of them, the first one in the five years they've known each other ... and long overdue. However, their idyllic love is tested when Luke refuses to give Naluma what she desperately desires: a child of their own.
When the Force gets involved, the couple learns that imposing the words of man on the will of the supreme power in the galaxy is never going to work--and the Force plays dirty when accomplishing its will. Luke and Naluma don't stand a chance.
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