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This book follows four teenagers from four different parts of the U.S. when their lives are dramatically changed one day. When zombies become real and more than just horror movies and scary books, they're forced to fight to stay alive. What they do...

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First of all, thank you so much to the people that have read this far! I love you guys! I didn't expect to get this many reads and have so many people like the book so much.




                          
The second book is now posted and it's called Still Alive (because I'm not creative with titles.) I'm making it up as a go along, like I did with so one, so hopefully it will turn out great! Thanks again!




                          
All the comments are great, but I'd like to have some helpful criticism too! Also, who's your favorite character(s)? Let me know in the comments!
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This book was phenomenal. I never comment usually but this was amazing. Like seriously!!

4y ago

Like, I love it, but it needs A LOT of cleaning up
1) You really gotta explain how the whole thing happened. Like, ik it’s not the main focus but they should at least know why the world went to shite. Was is a flu shot gone wrong?? Some other virus?? Gov’t biohazard that got out?? Say WHY there’s zombies. And why they all didn’t turn in the 1st place, bc it had to start with SOMEONE
2) I still don’t get why Megan just randomly shot herself, unless she was just plain crazy. Mica I get, that was coming for a while, like since Cassidy. And Was Allison infected when she shot herself?? Ik Adam was. Also if Cora found Laina AFTER she shot herself, the gun she used would have fallen out of her dead hand when Cora moved her to keep the zombies from eating her body. So the others would have found her body w/out the gun, where Cora dumped her; not where she actually shot herself
3) the woman that drove up to the farm where Gavin was in the silver car at the beginning. I’m so confused. If the bitten get weaker, she wouldn’t have been able to drive. Frankly, I don’t think she’d be coherent enough after being bitten by another human to even THINK to drive. 
4) doesn’t Jared have a HORRIBLY broken leg during all of this??
5) zombies can’t tip trucks. I get that they’re smart, but a) ITS A TRUCK b)they’re decaying. Muscles atrophy bc they’re DEAD (are they even dead?? people turn before they die. That’s another thing too) and then c) again, it’s a truck
6) if they’re not dead, why are they decaying. Half eaten, yes. But technically they don’t die

Just a couple thoughts!!

6y ago

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