The Darkness of Forever

What if something terrible happened to you and all you wanted to do was become the normal teenager you were before the incident and given the opportunity to have your life back again, no matter what the consequences? Would you do it? Even if becoming “normal” again meant you would first have to become something so mythical and different and beyond anything you could ever imagine? Would you still do it? Nicky is your typical teenage girl whose life unfortunately gets cut short one day by a hit and run driver. Not able to adjust easily in the afterlife, she yearns to go back to her human life and tries desperately to find a way. Eventually she does but soon realizes that there are always consequences for your actions and the shadows waiting in the dark are there to make you pay for deeds done, no matter which lifetime they were performed in.
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Slow down a bit, let us get to know your characters a bit more. The dialog isn't too realistic either, but still good :D LOVE this story, finishing it later!!!
You're an excelent writer!!! This story shows promise, and i'm defenatly reading on :D
Awwww... It was sad at the beginning but it was amazing how you wrote with such emotion. I like the idea of your story its brilliant :) x
It’s a good Mysterious start to a book. Perfect for a proIogue! I would defiantly go on. Good Job!!!


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Name Alana Topakian
Location Raleigh, NC
Birthday Apr 15
Member Since Sep 22, 2011
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