Okay, So ive just started this and i tottaly love it already, It flows and its just my type of story. :)
I like Clarisse.... This is so cute! Amazing idea, and i love your style of writing!
just a little tip of advice i would use words instead of the number eg) four instead of 4 overall very good though voted:) beachie97
The opening didn't really catch me at all. Other than that, everything was good. Your writing was well, just as your description and flow was. Great job.
Very cute :D But not sure about the parantheses, acronyms and the numbers in the story ^^
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